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Sat Jan 01, 2011 7:34 am
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Elinor says...



Hello!

I had one of these threads a long while ago, but it's buried somewhere within the long and forgotten pages of this forum, and with the new year at hand, I believed that it would be nice to start anew. Also, this will help me toward my resolution of reviewing more frequently.

If you would like a review from me, all you need to do is post a link here and I will have your review back to you within the next one to three days. If that amount of time has passed and you still have not received your critique, feel free to send me a PM. I accept any original fiction under 5,000 words (or around for the max) and any Art/Photography. I will also review poetry, but please note that it is not my strong point in the slightest. Please don't ask me to start reviewing your novel in the middle unless there is a summary up or something else of the sort so I have an idea of what is going on. The same goes for short stories with multiple parts.

In my fiction reviews, I will be thorough, but I don't usually look into grammar unless it's really bad -- I'll address characterization, plot, pacing, ect. If there is something you would like me to focus on in your review, just let me know. :)

For my art reviews, I'm generally pretty thorough -- I'll look at the overall quality of the picture. For art, I will look at color, texture, lines, use of space, shading, etc. For photography I will look at lighting, angles, color, focus, and if you used digital effects to edit, I will look at how well that compliments/takes away from your photo. Again, if there is anything you would like me to focus on, just let me know. :)

Please only ask me to review one thing at a time -- if there is more then one thing you would like me to review, you may request it once I am done reviewing your first thing.

Who wants one? I am ready to start taking requests. :)
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Mon Jan 03, 2011 4:51 am
Evi says...



The Waking Hours (2/3) is up! Your review was very helpful on the first part, and if you could get to this one too I'd be extremely grateful. I'd love to know if you thought Rory was a little less bland here-- I tried to take everyone's suggestions into account, but I had already written the whole story before I posted part one, so no major rewrites yet. Thanks so much, dear!
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Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:53 am
Kamas says...



topic74037.html

Give this a poke? I just more of an opinion then I've been given
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Tue Jan 04, 2011 3:18 am
Elinor says...



Thanks for the requests!

Yours is done Evi; it was a pleasure to read! Kamas, I will be getting to yours as soon I can. :D

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Tue Jan 04, 2011 3:44 am
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I really appreciate this! :)
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Tue Jan 04, 2011 11:14 pm
Elinor says...



Finished yours, Kamas. Hope it helps!

I will be getting to yours soon, Bubbles. :)

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Wed Jan 05, 2011 8:32 am
Hecate says...



Hey could your review my poem please?

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Thanks :D





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Sat Jan 08, 2011 5:58 pm
Elinor says...



All done, guys!

Who will be my next helpless victim sweet person that I will review? :D

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Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:48 pm
Sins says...



Hey there, Ellie. ^^

Would you mind reviewing the next part of Stop and Stare for me?

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I've gotten some great reviews already, but I've now edited the piece with their help, so I'd like to get some new opinons and feedback. Please and thank you!
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Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:37 pm
Yuriiko says...



Hey Elinor!

Would you review this?

Thanks a lot. :D
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Sun Jan 09, 2011 4:09 pm
TedusCloud says...



If you ever have enough time
Could you please review this: topic73947.html

It's a very long piece so I hope that won't deter you!
Pieces of People: 42,044 words. Only 57,956 to go :D





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Sun Jan 09, 2011 6:53 pm
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It'd be really appreciated :D
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Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:05 pm
Elinor says...



Finished, Yuri and Skins.

I'll get to yours soon Tedus and Emmy.

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Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:34 pm
cassidyrose says...



Can you review mine if you get a chance? I only have 1 chapter though.
Also, I still can't figure out how you add another chapter to your story, Can you help me?
Thnx,
Cassidy Rose
I have no idea what to put so I am writing random things. There. That should be enough.





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Wed Jan 12, 2011 5:51 pm
Elinor says...



Done, Emmy. Getting to yours soon, Tedus!

Cassidy, can you please provide a link to the piece you want me to review? Then I'll be able to help you. :)

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