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Sat Dec 11, 2010 7:42 pm
Sunshine says...



Hi I'm crafty and I'll be your reviewer! :smt002
Edit: I really want to get this going again! I'm actually starting to get the hang of reviewing and am beginning to enjoy it. Also, I've recently been given the storybooker badge and I want to work my way up to the reviewer badge!
P.S. By thread I mean like sewing thread- what color do you prefer?

My will review favorites:
-Poetry ( I love reviewing that! :D )
- Fanfiction (Preferably Warriors, Percy Jackson, and The Hunger Games. )
- Historical Fiction (Especially Greek things and the early 1900's and later 1800's.
-General Fiction (Imagination all out- who can resist that?)


Will review:
- Fantasy
-Romance
-Lyrics (I enjoy reviewing these, but I can't guarantee an amazing review.)
- Fan-fic's. (Harvest Monn, Zelda, Harry Potter, Maximum Ride, Avatar: The last Airbender.)
-Historical fiction (Not from the above era's.)
-Sci-Fi (Same deal as lyrics)


Will not review:
-Non-fiction
-Anything rated 16+ ( Seriously. Don't ask.)



Thanks and please give me the oppurtunity to review you! Peace, Love, write, and rubber duckies!
Last edited by Sunshine on Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:23 am, edited 4 times in total.
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!





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Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:11 pm
Boolovesyou says...



Hey would you like to review two things for me =p. They are both poems.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73088 And http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73070
Milestiba uzvar visu, Milestiba ir upuris.





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Thu Dec 16, 2010 12:44 am
Sunshine says...



Thanks! Done!
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!





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Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:10 am
Incognito says...



Would you happen to review my prologue? I need feedback. (:
It is General Fiction, and it is right here;
The Melancholy Tale of Darren Everrest.
Its only a prologue.
Please and thank you!
~Incognito
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Sun Dec 19, 2010 2:02 am
Sunshine says...



Done! (and enjoyed it!)
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!





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Mon Dec 20, 2010 12:09 am
Sins says...



Hey there, crafty. :)

I was wondering if you'd review something for me... hence why I'm posting here. x3

novel.php?id=915

It's the beginning of my novel. Right now, I've got two parts up, both of which are chapter one. You don't have to review the both if you don't want to, but I hope you don't mind reviewing at least one.

Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Fri Dec 24, 2010 2:26 am
Sunshine says...



Done! And I love you in a none creepish way to!
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!





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Fri Dec 24, 2010 4:29 am
Roal says...



Hey there! Can you please review my first chapter of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer? If you do, you'll get this...

Spoiler! :
amazing duct tape tie!
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14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.





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Sat Dec 25, 2010 4:34 pm
Sunshine says...



I love you for that. Yes, Yes I can.
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!





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Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:28 am
Lord Anzius says...



Hullo :D
Would you review this piece for me? :)

Been working on it for a while it is the intro and first part of the first chapter (the whole of the first chapter will be like over 20 pages long so I'm just putting here the first part :P )
It is called Fear and it's General fiction and for now it's rated 12 + for language, though the following chapters will be from 12+ to 16+ to 18+ .

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69539.html#p763503
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
-Giuseppe Verdi-





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Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:28 am
Wolf says...



Could you please take a look at this? :)
topic73808.html

It's Fantasy, & the first chapter of a novel. Thank you in advance!
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


Would you like a review?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73903.html





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Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:31 am
HIGHWHITESOCKS says...



I'd be super appreciative if you could review this!

topic73802.html

Thanks a million! :)
- SOCKS
Would you kindly?





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Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:47 am
Sunshine says...



Done, Done, and Done.
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!





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Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:48 pm
ToritheMonster says...



Mind looking at my poem?

topic74010.html


Thanks!
Honey, you should see me in a crown.





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Tue Jan 04, 2011 1:06 am
Sunshine says...



Doney o done!
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!








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