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Fri Nov 19, 2010 6:46 pm
Teardrop says...



Hello! I'm Teardrop, and here to review.

I'll review anything but scripts and nonfiction! Just give me the link and I'll get to it in a few days.

I will review novels, like completely all the chapters, you'd just have to give me time. It might take a week depending on how long it is and how busy I am.

* All Reviews Are Free *

Bring On The Reviews!

<3 Teardrop <3
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:54 pm
SilentRain says...



Well, I guess I'm the first person to ask for a review...

Don't you feel lucky!! :)

So, this is a poem,
Its name is Letters from Your Shadow
I want the truth, don't worry about hurting my feeling, you won't.

Bye!!

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:14 am
Teardrop says...



Finished. : )
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:31 pm
Teardrop says...



: D
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Mon Dec 06, 2010 12:34 am
Roal says...



Hello there Teardrop!
I have a short story that would like to be reviewed: topic72853.html
Thanks in a bunch ^o^
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





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Tue Dec 07, 2010 9:23 pm
Teardrop says...



All finished!
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Wed Dec 08, 2010 2:53 am
SilentRain says...



Hello again!!
topic72886.html
This is another poem, Called Letters to the Dead
Kinda sounds like the first request does it not?
No well,
Thanks in advance,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:12 pm
Boolovesyou says...



Hey would you like to review two things for me =p. They are both poems.http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73088 And http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73070

Thanks ^.^
Milestiba uzvar visu, Milestiba ir upuris.
  





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Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:13 pm
Teardrop says...



Finished! By the way, the first link didn't work. : )
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Sat Dec 18, 2010 2:38 am
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Sins says...



Hey Tear. :)

Would you remind reviewing this for me? topic72983.html

I've edited it since my previous reviews, so I'd love some new opinions on it. Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:03 pm
Teardrop says...



Finished! : D
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:07 am
LadySpark says...



would you please review a new novel of mine?
It's called The Magi

novel.php?id=976

thanks :),
*huggles*
Pointe
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:10 am
GrenadeCatcher says...



Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :)
Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.)
Hope you enjoy!
topic74030.html

PS: I love your avvie! I love Christofer Drew :D
Love is all you need (Babadada)
Hide yo wife! Hide yo children! Hide yo HUSBAND! They rapin EVERYBODY out there!
  





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Sun May 01, 2011 6:02 pm
Teardrop says...



GrenadeCatcher- Thanks! Same here!

Also guys, I haven't been checking this in a while, I'm sorry guys. I completely forgot. But I promise I'll finish any requests right away! I've been in a reviewy mood lately, hence review day and review teams. ( Go Team Toxic Nudibranch!! : )
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  








You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.
— Uncle Iroh