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Fri Nov 19, 2010 6:46 pm
Teardrop says...



Hello! I'm Teardrop, and here to review.

I'll review anything but scripts and nonfiction! Just give me the link and I'll get to it in a few days.

I will review novels, like completely all the chapters, you'd just have to give me time. It might take a week depending on how long it is and how busy I am.

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Bring On The Reviews!

<3 Teardrop <3
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:54 pm
SilentRain says...



Well, I guess I'm the first person to ask for a review...

Don't you feel lucky!! :)

So, this is a poem,
Its name is Letters from Your Shadow
I want the truth, don't worry about hurting my feeling, you won't.

Bye!!

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:14 am
Teardrop says...



Finished. : )
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:31 pm
Teardrop says...



: D
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Mon Dec 06, 2010 12:34 am
Roal says...



Hello there Teardrop!
I have a short story that would like to be reviewed: topic72853.html
Thanks in a bunch ^o^
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





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Tue Dec 07, 2010 9:23 pm
Teardrop says...



All finished!
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Wed Dec 08, 2010 2:53 am
SilentRain says...



Hello again!!
topic72886.html
This is another poem, Called Letters to the Dead
Kinda sounds like the first request does it not?
No well,
Thanks in advance,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:12 pm
Boolovesyou says...



Hey would you like to review two things for me =p. They are both poems.http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73088 And http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73070

Thanks ^.^
Milestiba uzvar visu, Milestiba ir upuris.
  





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Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:13 pm
Teardrop says...



Finished! By the way, the first link didn't work. : )
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Sat Dec 18, 2010 2:38 am
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Sins says...



Hey Tear. :)

Would you remind reviewing this for me? topic72983.html

I've edited it since my previous reviews, so I'd love some new opinions on it. Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:03 pm
Teardrop says...



Finished! : D
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:07 am
LadySpark says...



would you please review a new novel of mine?
It's called The Magi

novel.php?id=976

thanks :),
*huggles*
Pointe
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:10 am
GrenadeCatcher says...



Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :)
Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.)
Hope you enjoy!
topic74030.html

PS: I love your avvie! I love Christofer Drew :D
Love is all you need (Babadada)
Hide yo wife! Hide yo children! Hide yo HUSBAND! They rapin EVERYBODY out there!
  





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Sun May 01, 2011 6:02 pm
Teardrop says...



GrenadeCatcher- Thanks! Same here!

Also guys, I haven't been checking this in a while, I'm sorry guys. I completely forgot. But I promise I'll finish any requests right away! I've been in a reviewy mood lately, hence review day and review teams. ( Go Team Toxic Nudibranch!! : )
And are the doctors dancing in, while the ambulances sing. Another boy without a sharper knife. The moment, that's where I kill the conversation, wrap this up with a knife that loves to feel. How do you know how deep to go before it's real?
- Yeah Boy And Doll Face ~ Pierce The Veil
  








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