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Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:06 pm
LadySpark says...



PLEASE ASK ME FOR REVIEWS! PLEASE! :D :) :o :shock: 8) :mrgreen: :smt003 :smt004 :pirate2: :pirate3:


POETRY:
lyric
Dramatic
Other



SHORT STORIES:
romantic short stories
Action and Adventure short stories
Fantasy short stories



Misc:
Lyrics
Scripts


Novels
Action and Adventure
Fantasy
Romantic
Science fiction
Historical fiction

*note if you ask me to review a whole novel specify if you want CHAPTERLY REVIEWS or OVERALL REVIEWS

Will not consider:

Fan- anything unless its Harry Potter, Percy Jackson or The hungar Games
Art and Photography (don't know anything about it)



Will consider

Antholigies
Fan- (Percy Jackson, Harry Potter and the Hunger games ONLY!)


Examples of my reviews:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post782877.html#p782877
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post782883.html#p782883
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post782863.html#p782863

Examples of my work you might consider reviewing:

Poetry:


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=70962
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71283
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71539

Series:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71603
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=70960

now for how I do my reviews:
~When you come across something thats bolded there is usually a red comment attached to it.
~The Stuff in blue is additions and the stuff striked out is subtractions
~Green means FABULOUS and Purple means okay *Note I don't always use the purple/green method
~at the end of a review there is going to be one of five things:
:D(awesome, 10 out of 10) :)(so-so 6 out of 10) :/ (not my thing 4 out of 10) :( (ick! 2 out 10) :X (i'm going to be sick 0 out of 10)



Hope this helps and you'll ask me for reviews in future
and FYI I have never used :/ and :X so don't worry


In return: I don't ask for points though they would be appreciated :) but please review something in my portfolio :)


~pointe
Last edited by LadySpark on Sun Nov 14, 2010 2:38 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sun Nov 14, 2010 4:33 am
d@ydre@mer27 says...



viewtopic.php?t=71409 Chapter 1
viewtopic.php?t=71712 Chapter 2

I'd appreciate it if you could do a chapterly review as I post more.
Thanks!
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Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:40 pm
Jashael says...



Hey, Pointed, I remember you telling me that you'll review back. so here it goes! I'm the second one? =)

topic69583.html

LOL =))
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Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:54 am
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Rosendorn says...



Please check out Pointe's other thread to make a request. Since two are on the front page, this one is locked to avoid clutter. :)

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