Done both in half an hour, a record! Okay, so I've stopped crying for a little but I feel the tears coming again. Another review people and you won't have to start making Noah's Ark all over again.
Done!! HP was on, that's why there was a wait. But anyway, anyone else? I want to get my fourth star people so don't hesitate to pile it on. Especially since I am finished school for the year!
i think it's dead good poetry but i don't really understand what message it's trying to get across
You mean my signature? Lol! It's not supposed to be good, it's supposed to show how bad I am at writing poetry. But thank you for saying that it's good!
Anyone else for a review? Just remember, four stars. Me, need!
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again. and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.
I was wondering if you could read the rest of the screenplay that I've posted? Since it's long, I was just wondering if you could give me your overall feelings rather than reviewing each part individually?
SORRY! So sorry for the lateness, that was my fault and I'm sorry. I've been going in and out of hospital for sick relatives and I haven't had much time to sit on the computer. I've got more time now (not tonight though) but I'm still willing to do reviews. These will get done a lot faster. Don't be afraid, just post your request and I'll get to it. I won't let nothing stop me this time!
Could you review this? It's long and almost three chapters, but take your time, and I don't need reviews as such for prologue and chapter-1, but chapter-1 is alone.
Thanks and ask me for review on my WRFF thread if you need.
~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go... — Dr. Seuss
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