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Fri Mar 18, 2011 6:49 pm
Kamas says...



Reopened.
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

#tnt
  





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Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:32 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



Kamas..... I love you :)

Sorry, Songbird

Please and thank you!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sun Mar 20, 2011 9:01 pm
Kamas says...



Done Dreamy :3
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Sun Mar 20, 2011 9:31 pm
Button says...



*sneaks in and pounces on you*
RAWR

Okay. So. If you could please take a look at this, I think I would love you forever. And give you that cheesecake I mentioned.

viewtopic.php?t=76752

I'm tired. Please excuse the nonsense.
  





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Sun Mar 20, 2011 11:05 pm
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Kamas says...



Done.
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:54 pm
Rascalover says...



Will you please review chapter three of my romantic novel viewtopic.php?t=77710 please
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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html
  





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Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:40 pm
ehte92 says...



Hello there.

Could you review this poem?

Thank you. :D
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Sat Apr 23, 2011 4:19 am
carbonCore says...



'Lo, a review for this would be appreciated: viewtopic.php?t=79050
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Sat Apr 23, 2011 6:23 am
Kamas says...



Done you two!
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

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Mon Apr 25, 2011 6:03 pm
Caduceus says...



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hahahaha! I got reviews alllready so thanks anyway! :D :D :D :D :D :D
Last edited by Caduceus on Fri Apr 29, 2011 9:43 pm, edited 2 times in total.
  





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Wed Apr 27, 2011 4:25 am
HostofHorus says...



Hey Kamas,
I was wondering if you wouldn't mind taking a look at my poem! Thanks!

topic79975.html
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Thu May 12, 2011 1:47 am
Dreamwalker says...



I'm a glutton for punishment :) Thought who could give me the harshest, least biased review and you were the first that came to mind ^_^ If this isn't to old, want to possibly take a look?

~Weathered
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Fri May 20, 2011 4:35 pm
Lavvie says...



MacNair.

Thanks in advance :) It's a poem, by the way.


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Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:01 am
Explosive_Pen says...



Hey Kamas! =D
I'd be honored to have you review this: topic82203.html
"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."
  





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