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Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:37 am
Kamas says...



Will review:

Any poetry
Artwork
Photography

Will not review:

Anything prose.

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If you post a link, would be great. I'm not the kindest reviewer, but I'll try my best to offer the most constructive criticism possible. : )

Reviews that are done:



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Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:18 am
Elinor says...



Hey Kamas. :D

Can you take a look at this poem for me? Thanks much. ^^

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Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:45 pm
Kale says...



Mon ami, ce poème, s'il vous plaît.

(And I apologize for my flagrant abuse of the French language.)
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Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:11 am
SilentRain says...



Hello!

This is Rain
This is a poem topic71777.html
and this is its name- Dark

and this--> is me saying thank you

Thanks!!

~Rain~

And now good-bye!
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:56 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

topic72396.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver
  





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Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:35 am
Flower~Child says...



Will you review my poem?

topic72411.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:36 am
Kamas says...



Done everyone, except you Flower. I'll get to yours as soon as I can.
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Fri Nov 26, 2010 7:45 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there, me again! Would you mind reviewing another poem for me? Thanks!

topic72468.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
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Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:44 pm
Kamas says...



Done!
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Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:23 pm
Lumi says...



Hey Commas! If you get a chance, maybe you could take a crack at Ivy Rose?

Thanks in advance! ;)
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Sat Dec 04, 2010 5:18 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there, Kamas! Would you mind taking a look at another poem for me? Thanks.

topic72796.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
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Sun Dec 05, 2010 7:54 pm
lilymoore says...



Wow, it has been a long time since I ended up in this forum. Like...a long time. Anyways, Kams, do you think you could take a look at this poem for me pretty pleeease. ^^

I might just have to set up a new WRFF too since I'm here.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:18 pm
Kamas says...



Eep! Haven't check this in a while! I'll get to these as quickly as possible.
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Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:38 pm
Button says...



Hi there :)

If you have a bit of extra time, would you mind looking at this, please?

topic73112.html


Thanks so much!

-Coral-
  





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Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:43 pm
Kamas says...



I haven't really looked at this, closed until I can get to all the reviews I owe.
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I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
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