Young Writers Society

Your review is finished. (As bad as it was.)

I'm kind of nervous...but anyway:

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Hey Silented1, can you please review with special format poem for me?http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post794877.html#p794877
Thanks =D if u can haha

Hello!
If you have the time/if it's not too absolutely horrendous would you please review this for me?:
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I've always been more of a story writer, so it was just this summer that I wrote my first poems and have been writing them on and off for a few months. I am a novice, so be as harsh as you can. I want to get better.

Thanks!

Drawers

ps: I was pretty sure from your title that you are open at the moment. If you are not I apologize, and do not worry about me.

Your review is done. And I am still sorry boo.

Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ...

Click on the link for more details...

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Thanks,

~Rain~

If you have the time, could you please take a look at this?

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Thanks- really appreciate it.

-Coral-

So, I asked you to reply this before, but you were having a bad week sooo here it is again.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73070
Its a special format poem.
If you can't, I understand.

Hi there.... again.

I was wondering if you have the time if you could please look at this:

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I know. I'm quite asky. But you give great reviews, despite what you say.

Thanks!

-Coral-

I wish to feed.

hi there silented1, can you review this for me?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75659.html

And when reviewing, can you focus on the plot, the style and the characters rather than the grammar? It is because I want to know which part of story making is my strength and weakness like a literal critic. So that when I make a new story, I know what to improve.

Sorry, I only review poetry.

No body?

Hey Ed.

Here's something... even though it's longer than your preference. >.<
Feel free to disregard it if you want.

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With Perse's poetry, disregarding is never an option.

And could you review this? It'd be appreciated.