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Tue Dec 07, 2010 7:54 pm
silented1 says...



Your review is finished. (As bad as it was.)
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Wed Dec 08, 2010 3:31 am
Jashael says...



I'm kind of nervous...but anyway:

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Fri Dec 10, 2010 9:49 pm
Boolovesyou says...



Hey Silented1, can you please review with special format poem for me?http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post794877.html#p794877
Thanks =D if u can haha
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 5:31 pm
Drawers says...



Hello!
If you have the time/if it's not too absolutely horrendous would you please review this for me?:
viewtopic.php?t=73083

I've always been more of a story writer, so it was just this summer that I wrote my first poems and have been writing them on and off for a few months. I am a novice, so be as harsh as you can. I want to get better.

Thanks!

Drawers

ps: I was pretty sure from your title that you are open at the moment. If you are not I apologize, and do not worry about me.
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 9:31 pm
silented1 says...



Your review is done. And I am still sorry boo.
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Mon Dec 13, 2010 3:55 am
SilentRain says...



Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ...

Click on the link for more details...

viewtopic.php?t=72999

Thanks,

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topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:32 pm
Button says...



If you have the time, could you please take a look at this?

topic73814.html

Thanks- really appreciate it. :)

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Fri Dec 31, 2010 8:29 am
Boolovesyou says...



So, I asked you to reply this before, but you were having a bad week sooo here it is again.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=73070
Its a special format poem.
If you can't, I understand.
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Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:16 am
Button says...



Hi there.... again. :)

I was wondering if you have the time if you could please look at this:

topic74039.html

I know. I'm quite asky. But you give great reviews, despite what you say.

Thanks!

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Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:35 am
silented1 says...



I wish to feed.
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:09 am
cannoncomplex says...



hi there silented1, can you review this for me?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75659.html

And when reviewing, can you focus on the plot, the style and the characters rather than the grammar? It is because I want to know which part of story making is my strength and weakness like a literal critic. So that when I make a new story, I know what to improve.
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 11:50 am
silented1 says...



Sorry, I only review poetry.
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Tue Feb 22, 2011 7:43 am
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No body?
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Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:47 am
Button says...



Hey Ed. :)

Here's something... even though it's longer than your preference. >.<
Feel free to disregard it if you want.

topic76888.html
  





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Sat Mar 05, 2011 5:55 am
Kafkaescence says...



With Perse's poetry, disregarding is never an option. :D

And could you review this? It'd be appreciated.
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