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Mon May 23, 2011 6:08 am
cupcake says...



Can you please review this for me if you can?
topic81193.html
Thanks.
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Wed May 25, 2011 7:13 pm
Vampyre says...



Hey, hey, only me, would you please have a go at my poem?
Thanks :)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post865211.html#p865211
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades


  





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Wed May 25, 2011 8:30 pm
silented1 says...



vampyre your review is done. Cupcake, your's too.
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html
  





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Fri May 27, 2011 1:18 am
Jas says...



post854585.html#p854585

One harsh review please! Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Mon Feb 25, 2019 4:59 am
silented1 says...



Bump.
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html
  





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Mon Mar 04, 2019 1:04 am
OofOof1 says...



Here it is

Lies
listen here, you don't need to post your food on social media in order to eat it. :pirate3:
  





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Sat Mar 09, 2019 1:36 am
WritingPrincess says...



Hi, could you possibly review this poem for me: I don’t care
Thanks!
  








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