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Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:57 pm
Tigersprite says...



Hi fellow YWSers! RAWR! I've been wondering whether to start a Will Review For Food Thread, and I've finally decided to! So I'll just tell you what I will and won't review, and without further ado you can post your requests! :smt003

What I Will Review

-Fantasy

-Poetry (however if you're the kind of person who doesn't like their poetry to be corrected, then don't post here.)

-Action/Adventure

-Sci-Fi

-General Fiction

-Art & Photography (though it may not be a proper review but more of a comment.)

-Some Non-Fiction (not essays or letters)

-Historical Fiction

What I Won't Review

-Romance

-Non-Fiction essays and letters.

-Scripts

-Lyrics

-Fan Fiction (unless it's really, really good, on something I actually like)

(If you want a Romance review, or a great story follower, request a review at Born to be a...reviewer. Her reviews are awesome ;) )

NOTE: I will review chapters, but only up to Chapter Three (unless it's something very interesting that I'm following) and you must have patience because they will take longer to review. I will review Advanced Critiques, but again it will take longer to review (I'm talking about a week plus). And one at a time, please.

Also, I would prefer not to have to read anything 18. 16 is fine, but unless the case is really exceptional (you've not gotten any reviews for two weeks, etcetera) I would prefer not to have to read anything 18.

Please remember to provide a link to the work, and preferably a name for it too.

Reviews may be HARSH.


If you want some examples of my reviewing, here you go:

Fantasy Short Story

Dramatic Poetry

Non-Fiction

A Fantasy Novel Chapter

Another Fantasy Novel Chapter (seeing a pattern here ;)):

Payment

None required! Though if you follow me I'd appreciate it, and I do like to get a reply on my wall, perhaps how my review helped or whether or not you agreed with it.


Awaiting your work,

Tiger
Last edited by Tigersprite on Mon Aug 01, 2011 10:16 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Sun Nov 07, 2010 4:06 pm
aweqs says...



Hey :)

I am currently writing a sci-fi novel- but in seperate chapters.
If you could be bothered, i would appreciate it so much if you could review it!
I have posted up to Chapter 4, and have had 1 comment xD
I really want to improve my writing, and im sure you could help me :)

Thanks alot!

-Ava

/Isha:/= To be honest, we are talking about mostly nothing which in its own essence is something. But somethingness can't be nothing if there isn't nothing in the first place. So really, we're talking about meaningly somethingness that's technically caused by nothingness.


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Sun Nov 07, 2010 4:13 pm
Tigersprite says...



Okay, could I have a link please?
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Sun Nov 07, 2010 6:21 pm
aweqs says...



oops yeah sorry xD

topic71645.html

/Isha:/= To be honest, we are talking about mostly nothing which in its own essence is something. But somethingness can't be nothing if there isn't nothing in the first place. So really, we're talking about meaningly somethingness that's technically caused by nothingness.


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Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:51 pm
Shearwater says...



Haha, me too! =D
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Poem, rip it.

-Shear
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Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:53 pm
Tigersprite says...



All done aweqz!
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Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:04 pm
Tigersprite says...



All done Pink! And I don't think you should change the title, it suits the poem just fine. ;)
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Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:15 am
narniafreak12 says...



If you have time... please review. However, this has a few reviews already so if you just want to read this and go on to the first part that's fine.

Link to prologue: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53301.html

Thanks! :)

-Narniafreak! :D

P.S. if you want me to review anything just ask... I'll review stories...





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Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:50 pm
Tigersprite says...



All done Narnia! :D Anyone else?
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Mon Nov 08, 2010 7:44 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



Whoops! I accidently deleted the link! Luna Ch. 1
Want a heavenly review?

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Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:13 pm
Tigersprite says...



All done Pinkangel!
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Tue Nov 09, 2010 1:01 am
SilentRain says...



Hello, Hello, Hello, and Hello one last time!

Ok, so this is a poem,

topic71777.html

Thanks!

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:10 pm
Tigersprite says...



All done Silent! Great poem by the way! ;) Anyone else?
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Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:27 pm
Button says...



I'd reallllly appreciate a review on this if you have any time. :)
However, if things are a bit busy cause of NaNo, I completely understand.

topic71693.html



Thanks SO much!!! I really really appreciate it! :D

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Tue Nov 09, 2010 7:33 pm
Tigersprite says...



All done Persephoneia! Anyone else?
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