"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
When you have the time, could you review part three of Stop and Stare for me? I've gotten loads of epic reviews already, but I've recently edited it and would like a new opinion. ^^
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
(No matter what you think in the beginning, this is NOT a romance novel! Also, this story is a complete POV of my main character Anna, and she has flashbacks which I'm trying to place in the story.)
Thanks!
Taylor
~formerly Ilovebubbles123
"There's only one thing to do three words for you. Ooh, I love you.
There's only one way to say those three words that's what I'll do. Ooh, I love you. "
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... topic77210.html Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! -Jojo
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
I'm not sure if you still owe me reviews from the contest or not, but would you mind looking at my entry for cC's contest? It's a bit abstract, but that shouldn't be a problem for you--right? ^_~
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends. - Ethel Watts Mumford A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out. - Walter Winchell “I’ll Surprise you, I promise” -Adam Lambert
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
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