2! Could you reviewchapter 9of my novel for me please! I would like to know just a general impression of this chapter and some suggestions on where I should add description. (It's way to talky right now)
Can you review the three chapters I currently have up for my Fantasy Novel? You can choose which ever one you want to actuly review, or just read for the fun. Or review all of them, that'll be nice. :3
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
“I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you.” — Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince
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