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Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:39 pm
Mikko says...



*Raises hand and jumps up and down* Oooh me me me! LOL I know you're busy :wink: but could you review chapter 3 of Ship-wrecked? Yay! I knew you would say yes! xD Just click this :arrow: http://viewtopic.php?t=75239
when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams
  





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Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:43 pm
Piper says...



Hi! I'll take one, review anything. I seriously havn't had a Review on Saks In weeks. Take your pick!
Cats are like characters. You may say they're yours, but in reality, they own you. ~Me

You can take away all the arts you want, but soon, the children won't have anything to read or write about. ~Glen Holland
  





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Tue Jan 25, 2011 1:25 pm
LadySpark says...



Mikko: done!
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Tue Jan 25, 2011 3:43 pm
LadySpark says...



Saks, I reviewed your whole portfolio! any other takers??
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


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Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:01 pm
Sins says...



Hey there, pointe! I have a bit of a big ask...

Would you review my current novel for me? I've really liked some of your novels in the past, so I'd love to see what you think of one of mine, so far. I have three chapters in it at the moment, but it's split into five parts. Because it is five whole parts, I totally understand if you don't want to do it though.

novel.php?id=915

Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Wed Jan 26, 2011 12:02 am
Roal says...



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Heyyy :3
Can you pwease review mah short story? (p. 1)
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





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Wed Jan 26, 2011 12:40 am
theotherone says...



Hello there. :)

Really want something to review? Well... I've got some things... ;)
Chapter 8 of my romantic novel, Take A Chance. I don't know if it's because it's bad, or just because it's chapter eight, and nobody actually follows a novel that far... :) I think you've reviewed the chapter before that, but I just want to tell you that there's usage of words not meant for little ears, but it's not rated, because I forgot. :S And one more thing, I know you said just one review at a time, so I won't expect you to actually do the two parts. :D

viewtopic.php?t=74426 <----- chapter 8 part one

viewtopic.php?t=75050 <------ chapter 8 part two!

Thanks in advance!

-Other One
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:53 pm
LadySpark says...



TOO done
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Wed Jan 26, 2011 6:12 pm
TriO says...



Hey sis!
Lyric Poetry - The Stars
It's pretty short, and to be honest, was written in 20 minutes.
There will come a time you'll see, with no more tears
and love will not break your heart, but dismiss your fears.
Get over your hill and see what you find there
with grace in your heart and flowers in your hair.
~Mumford and Sons


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Thu Jan 27, 2011 1:41 pm
LadySpark says...



Skins, Roal, Elder, your reviews will be done on review day.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:05 am
LadySpark says...



Roal done
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Sun Jan 30, 2011 1:08 am
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LadySpark says...



Sean done.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:03 pm
LadySpark says...



any more reviews? (requests)
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:01 am
TriO says...



Hey sis! I came to ask you for an ickle review please.
It's my poem: Patience
Please only do it if you're not too busy with rehearsals and stuff; I won't mind.
~Sean
There will come a time you'll see, with no more tears
and love will not break your heart, but dismiss your fears.
Get over your hill and see what you find there
with grace in your heart and flowers in your hair.
~Mumford and Sons


My name is ElderMimmi.
  





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Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:22 pm
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LadySpark says...



Sean, done.

Any more Takers??
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  








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