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Sat Feb 23, 2013 6:02 pm
LadySpark says...



reopened.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Sun Mar 03, 2013 9:02 pm
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BenGrange says...



Hey! I'm looking for a review of my children's fantasy novel. Right now I have four chapters posted, and the first one has been reviewed a lot. The other three, however, not so much. I'd really appreciate a review of the second, third, and fourth chapters.
Here's the link to my profile:
profile/BenGrange/portfolio

I hope you like it, but I really hope you find things that need to be fixed/worked through. Let me know what you think.

Thanks!

Ben
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Tue Dec 03, 2013 2:53 pm
LadySpark says...



Okay guys, repopened! *bump*
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Tue Dec 03, 2013 11:33 pm
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ShortBus says...



Looks like you need something to do.

This story is really for the young male demographic, so I would love to hear your thoughts on it.

Quest Unable Chapter One (Rough Draft)
  





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Mon Dec 09, 2013 12:47 am
TheWyrdSister says...



Hello! Not sure if you're still doing these, but I'd love a review for http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106472. It's the first bit of a novel, but there's only one part currently up, so that's all I'm requesting be reviewed (...that's an awkward sentence...). :)
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Wed Dec 11, 2013 9:40 pm
Cirute says...



Would you be so kind as to review my chapter? I'll apologize in advance for it's length, I really should'v divided it into two chapters. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106164
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Sun Jun 15, 2014 8:52 pm
ire123 says...



Can you review the first chapter of my story Unexpected happening?
  








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