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Hello!

Yeh I will review anything! Just tell me what you need and I shall do it.

Thank you!

~Retro Disco666

topic71190.html Will you review this?

Hey! You're so nice for doing this.

Could you take a look at my novel? I'd greatly appreciate feedback. The first chapter is a little choppy, flow-wise, but after that it smoothes out.

Title: Captive
Genre: Historical/Romance
Summary: In the cold, isolated forests of 16th-century Europe, a lord takes a boy prisoner. As an unexpectedly tender relationship develops between captor and captive, resentment and distrust grow into warmth and trust in a pair of hearts that were once achingly empty. It aims to be a sensitive portrayal of a tender, if fragile, relationship that grows between two characters because of mutual loneliness as well as an intense longing for companionship. As a tentative trust develops between the two characters, the dynamics of their captor-captive relationship continually change as power is given, taken, and shared. As their bond deepens, the boy finds a new kind of freedom in his captivity and the man finds redemption for a brutal crime he committed.

novel.php?id=648

Thank you!

Hi
if you will, I would love reviews on my new poem
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic71281.html

Do you think you could take a look at this Retro? : viewtopic.php?t=71256

Thanks in advance,

TIGERSPRITE

Wait why for sale?? How much? LOL let it be free...

post763536.html#p763536 review this please

Could you do the any of the chapters of my novel-in-the-works, please? You can take your pick. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=731

Idraxx and Jennyr - I have every intention of doing both of your novels but please be patient for them as I will read them all, take notes and then give you one big review so it may take a while but that is just how it will be.

~Retro Disco666

retrodisco666 wrote:Idraxx and Jennyr - I have every intention of doing both of your novels but please be patient for them as I will read them all, take notes and then give you one big review so it may take a while but that is just how it will be.

~Retro Disco666

Okay, no problem. You're awesome for offering to critique.

Thank you so much!

Can you do chapt 1 of my fanfic novel
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