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Mon Oct 04, 2010 4:09 am
Talulahbelle says...



Hello, there, Somebody-I-Don't-Know.
It seems that you're in need of a review. Well, just your luck, I'm too scatterbrained and - I admit - lazy to go find things to review. So, why don't you do us both a favor and request one? Don't worry, just leave me a nice little message and I'll get to it pronto! I promise!
Thanks so much, Dollface!
Love ya,
Lu

P.S. When it comes to poetry - I know nothing beyond whether I liked it or not. I will read it and review it if you insist, but don't expect anything spectacular or insightful. My deepest apologies.
Last edited by Talulahbelle on Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:34 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Oct 04, 2010 12:30 pm
Yuriiko says...



Oh hello there!

Yes, I'm the first one. :3

Will you care to review a short story of mine?

Link: topic70224.html

Thanks in advance.

~yuri
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:18 am
screamandshout says...



viewtopic.php?t=70331

Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:53 am
Azula says...



If you have time, could you review this for me please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=70187
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:30 pm
Talulahbelle says...



So, there you go guys! Sorry to Azula for my useless poetry review - I seriously forgot to put that in my little add. I beg your forgiveness!
Now...who's next?
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:26 pm
carbonCore says...



Please review my story, The Law of Moses (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post770865.html). It's my first one posted on this site and I would like to see if the quality of the writing is a good enough level for this community. Thanks!
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:22 pm
Pretty Crazy says...



I'd like advice/opinions on this, please:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=667

I'm not demanding you read/review all three chapters. Whatever works for you is fine. Thanks in advance! :D
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Fri Oct 08, 2010 7:08 am
Jashael says...



Talulahbelle wrote:Hello, there, Somebody-I-Don't-Know.
It seems that you're in need of a review. Well, just your luck, I'm too scatterbrained and - I admit - lazy to go find things to review. So, why don't you do us both a favor and request one? Don't worry, just leave me a nice little message and I'll get to it pronto! I promise!
Thanks so much, Dollface!
Love ya,
Lu

P.S. When it comes to poetry - I know nothing beyond whether I liked it or not. I will read it and review it if you insist, but don't expect anything spectacular or insightful. My deepest apologies.


You gave me a promise! hahaha...kidding...please review this.

topic70345.html

Thanks. :) It would be better if you review the first one as well. *wink*
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Sun Oct 10, 2010 10:11 pm
Talulahbelle says...



There you go, darlings! Now, who else? Come on, I can handle it!
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Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:51 am
UrbanNomad says...



Hey I need some feedback on my poem "Clouds"
topic87751.html
If you could have a look soon that would be great (just whether you like it or not)
Thanks, Oliver





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Wed Jun 21, 2023 6:13 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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