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Careful With That Axe, Eugene



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Sat Oct 02, 2010 1:48 pm
Jagged says...



Hai. Finally here! I could ramble about how I've been meaning to make a thread here for eons but never got to it but I bet it'd bore you so I won't. Don't you like me already? Yes. Yes you do.

So. Jagz will review poetry and short stories, and maybe art (though not photography, because Jag knows nothing about that). Fair warning, I tend to obsess a bit a lot over flow and word choice, so be ready for some harking over that if it's poetry (for prose too, technically, but I can control myself better with those). I may not be the best person for historical fic, though I can certainly give it a look. Fanfiction is a-ok, as long as I actually know the fandom--just ask, and we'll see. I may be a bit slow in getting to the reviews because I am a procrastinator like that, but I swear they'll get doooone eventually.

What Jag will not do is scripts, lyrics, nonfic and novels. Pretty much everything else (aka what I mentioned in the paragraph above) is fair game, whatever genre, rating and pink polka dotted elephants you may see fit to tack on. Just give me a link to the piece, and whoo!

Hit me.

Title is shamelessly lifted from Pink Floyd, btw. I'm not that dangerous/crazy, honest.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET





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Mon Oct 04, 2010 12:40 pm
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Yuriiko says...



Yes, I'm the first one!

Hi there, Jaggy.

Will you care to rip this apart? This is my entry to Skins' contest. I would so much appreciate it if you would.

Here's the link: topic70224.html

Thank you in advance. :3
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense." -Sherrel Wigal





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Tue Oct 05, 2010 2:19 am
SilentRain says...



Hello, this is an older poem I wish to have reviewed, post770000.html#p770000

Thanks

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:17 am
screamandshout says...



viewtopic.php?t=70331

Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:19 am
Jas says...



post770614.html#p770614

It's the first part in a two part short story. Pretty please review it? :D

~Jas
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 4:49 am
blackbird12 says...



Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

post768574.html#p768574
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver





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Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:20 pm
Jagged says...



And done~
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Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:24 am
Flower~Child says...



I have a poem, please? topic70588.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Wed Oct 13, 2010 11:46 pm
Jagged says...



Who's next? :3
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Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:20 am
blackbird12 says...



Hey there, me again. :smt003 Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

topic70757.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

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Wed Nov 24, 2010 8:00 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there, would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

topic72396.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

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Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:07 am
spike71294 says...



Want a review for my poem- 'The Battle For Happiness'
topic72429.html





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Sat Dec 04, 2010 6:28 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey, Jagged! Mind reviewing another poem for me? Thanks!

topic72796.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver





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Mon Dec 06, 2010 6:06 pm
Nightshade says...



Hi :) Would you be willing to review one of my poems?
Here's a link:
topic72616.html
Thanks.





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Tue Jan 04, 2011 12:58 pm
Lumi says...



Look at me being all official.

<3
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.








It always seems impossible until it's done.
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