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Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:38 am
Reuben A says...



Alo all YWS people! I was away for AGES (Wow the amount of times I've said that :shock: ) But now I'm finnally back, and I need to get back to reviewing! So anyone, ANYONE who wants reviews just ask! But here's the catch....*drumroll* you have to ask ... (Don't you just feel nervous now?!) ...

Spoiler! :
nicely :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:


wow I feel so evil now. MWAHAHAHAA
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?





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Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:52 pm
Calligraphy says...



Will you pretty please review this memoir about my uncle Todd. Gilbert.

Thanks a bunch in advance,

A. S.





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Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:04 pm
Reuben A says...



Dooooonnnne! (Oooh I like the 'pretty please' mwa ha ha haaaa!! :twisted: :twisted:)
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?





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Wed Sep 29, 2010 1:57 am
SilentRain says...



Why hello there! :twisted:
Please review trhis poem for me, topic69987.html

Thanks :smt003

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:11 pm
Reuben A says...



Dooone! I forgot to add this people!

I forgot to say wrote:*1: I absolutely LOVE fantasy!
*2: The only thing that I can't review, is lyrics, or lyrical poetry... asking me to do lyrics would be like asking a pig to fly... :)
*3: Besides the above I review anything. Though prefrably things that aren't 18+, but if you ask EXTRA nice, who knows? :wink:
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?





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Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:37 am
Skippy says...



Hi. Can you please, please, please review my story?
topic69651.html
Thanks :)
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Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:27 pm
Reuben A says...



All done! I'm ready for more! Give me more! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!
MWAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:19 am
screamandshout says...



viewtopic.php?t=70331

Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.





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Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:30 am
Reuben A says...



Done! Sorry I took so long, my evil notifications didn't tell me about it... :evil:
I loved your story! Its really really well written, but I think you should put it under fantasy short stories
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?





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Wed Jun 21, 2023 6:15 am
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