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Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:46 pm
Carlito says...



Sorry. I had a review thing in the past and I didn't want to go find it because I assumed it was dead, but people just found it and started asking again so there's no need for me to have two.
People that asked on here I'll do your reviews, don't worry.
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Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:32 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there! Would you please review this short story for me? Thanks in advance!

topic68033.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver





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Thu Sep 16, 2010 9:02 pm
Carlito says...



Done! :)
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Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:10 am
Firearris says...



Do a short story of mine?

topic69428.html?hilit=coconuts%20september
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.





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Fri Sep 17, 2010 3:25 pm
Carlito says...



All done!
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Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:52 pm
Ktg17 says...



Hello!
I'm Ktg17 and I am seeking a review!

You can find my Non-Fiction story Here: topic69019.html
If you could be ever so kind as to review it, I would be very grateful. I know there are probably a lot of errors, so I apologize in advance for that.

Anyways, thanks Carly! :D
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Mon Sep 20, 2010 11:45 pm
Carlito says...



Done!
Neeext... :)
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:01 pm
Maki-Chan says...



My songs :)


topic69751.html soft sounds

topic69781.html sulfur
check out my deviantart account ^_^
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Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:04 pm
Maki-Chan says...



My songs :)


topic69751.html soft sounds

topic69781.html sulfur
check out my deviantart account ^_^
http://maki121.deviantart.com/





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Sat Sep 25, 2010 6:51 pm
Carlito says...



Done!

I'm totally participating in reviewing Sunday so if you want something done that day ask away! (Or any other day) :)
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

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Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:49 am
Calligraphy says...



Will you pretty please review my memoir Gilbert?

Thanks in advance,

A. S.








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