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The Masquerader Chap. 5 by megsug
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1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.

Nice chapter, Meg

Hello there! I was wondering if the Duo would take the time to review a short story of mine. It's a little long, but it would be lovely if you did it. It's called Paper Hearts and Bagels, and it's separated into two parts. I'll give the link to part one here:

viewtopic.php?t=76933

Link to part two can be found at the end of part one. You can review both parts as a whole or just do them individually.
Thank you so much,

Esther

Hello!

I was wondering if you might be so kind as to review this? We All Are Birds. Feel free to rip it to shreds, I need to really work on developing my voice as an author.

If you read it, I'd love you forever! Thanks,
-Once

Paper Hearts and Bagels by Esther Sylvester
Section One
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Section Two
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We are all Birds by onceuponatim3xo
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Hey, I'll get around to reviewing all this soon. Skins has also requested a review, and I'm quite partial to her, and I owe her a bit, so I'm going to be completing her request first haha.

Cheers guys and thanks for the patience.

- Jai

Hey,
I know you're busy and have other reviews to give, but you gave me such a great review on chapter five that I want to you to review the rest. I was really surprised to get that second review from you. I don't get that often without asking. Thanks.
Here's the other links. Please take your time.
topic68961.html Chapter 1Part1

topic69156.html Chapter1Part2

post769346.html#p769346 Chapter 2

topic71554.html Chapter 3

topic73673.html Chapter 4

No problem

I've just about finished reviewing Stop and Stare for Skins, so as soon as I've reviewed the last chapter and summed up all my points, I'll start with all the requests I should have completed a while ago (Sylvester, OnceUponATime) first. Then I'll get to the rest of your novel, Meg.

Thanks for the requests, guys. Keeps me busy and active in writing which I love.

The Masquerader by megsug
Chapter One - Part One
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Chapter One - Part Two
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Chapter Two
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Chapter Three
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Chapter Four
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<3

- Jai

(Oh, also, Light_Devil has 6 assignments, I've been told. She's in year 12, so yeah. School)

Hi!:) I would appreciate it if you could review the first chapter (split into two parts) of my novel, "Anything But Normal". Thanks so much! :) Here's the link:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=1206

Hey! Could you review my short story?

It's general fiction, it's called 'My great in day detail.'
Here's the link:

topic77272.html

Thankss xoxo!

Hi guys, I'm really sick. It completely sucks. When I get sick, I get sick. Imagine you getting sick, and times that by at least two. So. Right now the computer screen is actually giving me a headache.

As soon as I get better (and of course I have to be sick during a weekend. No outings for me), I'll review. I might even be better tomorrow!

Normally I complete reviews within a day or so from the request, so I sincerely apologise for the delay beforehand.

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Anything but Normal by rayhutch5
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My great in day detail by stelagineva
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Will review soon.

*sneezes all over the keyboard*

- Jai

Alright, guys, as designated Dragon Lady, I'm trying to get onto track with your reviews.



Actually - I'm going to ask this instead. Out of the ones I have to review, who actually still wants theirs reviewed?

I know that's slack and I know I haven't been reviewing as much as I should, but I don't want to waste my time reviewing stories which no one will even notice, while people still want theirs done.

I might PM everyone, just in case.

omg, my evil sister lives! o.O

Do you mind reviewing my short story? It's for a contest and I just need a brief overview. post872990.html#p872990 It's called stealing time away.

Your wish is my command ^^

Stealing Time Away by Flower~Child
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Yo!

I've recently edited the latest chapter of the novel I'm currently writing, so I'd really appreciate some opinions on it now that it's edited. It is a random chapter, but there's a brief summary at the top of the post, so you should hopefully have a decent idea of what's going on through that.

Stop and Stare (Chapter 4.5)

You've got a lot on your plate right now, so take as long as you need. Please and thank you!

Can you take a look at The Tattoo Engineer - 2.1 (Revised)? I have a summary at the top so you shouldn't have to look at the past two chapters, though if you wouldn't mind reviewing them I'd be ever so grateful (but don't feel inclined to). Thanks!