Young Writers Society

Could yu please take a look at my short story?
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Please and thank you!

You dawgs, are genius!

What a cunning little business you've got going here. You smart people. This is really awesome.
So, here you go;
This is basically describing a scene and tesing my ability to create images, might be a little un-interesting but we'll have to deal with that one-

Thanks, and just because I'm really wowed by this whole thing, I might consider paying you. You know, in points. I know you already get points from the reviews that you do, but why not earn extra? So, how does 50 points per person sound depending on the length of the review?

Just shows how much I like this little thing.