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Sat Sep 11, 2010 11:56 pm
Ktg17 says...



OK guys! I am here to review your stuff!!!

What I will review: Anything except Scripts (sorry) and anything gory, extremely violent, gross, or inappropriate.

I like funny or things that make me smile, and review Romantic Fiction and stuff like that best.

IF THERE IS ANY SWEARING IN YOUR STORY, I WILL NOT REVIEW IT!!!!!!

Also, the rating must be lower than 16, because I am young and don't want to read something I'll regret later.
I want nothing in return, just a "Hello, Ktg!" every once in a while. :D


P.S. Post a link here for your story. Thanks!
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Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:45 am
HostofHorus says...



Hi there KTG!

I would like to have the honor of being your first reviewie. :) Here is the URL if you would be ever so kind.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69367.html

Thanks in advance!
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)





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Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:18 pm
jDawn says...



Aloha! I'd love it if you'd review this, I see you have another request on your hands and I don't need it asap just whenever you get time works!

Sky Sailing- topic69520.html

Thank you! :D

-Jessica
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3





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Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:30 am
SilentRain says...



Why hello! If you review poerty, give this a try>>> topic69559.html

Thanks

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:12 am
Firearris says...



Do this for me? :D Thanks

topic69428.html?hilit=coconuts%20september
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.





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Sat Sep 18, 2010 12:41 am
Ktg17 says...



Hey SilentRain. I owe you an apology.
I am very bad at reviewing poems and honestly don't know what to do. I read your poem and liked it a lot, but I wouldn't be helping you by reviewing it. I recommend going to someone who has experience with poems and having them review it for you. Once again, I apologize for my inability to help.

Sincerely,
Ktg17
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Mon Sep 27, 2010 10:37 pm
jDawn says...



Hola! I'm back! Thanks for reviewing Sky Sailing by the way! I'm here again with another request, nothing urgent just whenever you find time! Thank you so much in advance!

Morphia Chp. 1- post759825.html#p759825

Thanks!

- Jessica
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3





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Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:45 am
Calligraphy says...



Will you review my memoir Gilbert. Sooner would be better.

Thankyou





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Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:38 am
Skippy says...



Hi, Can you please review this story for me?
viewtopic.php?t=69651
Thanks :)
Music explains life. Music has a purpose. Music speaks the truth. Music never lies. Music means everything to me.
Music is my life.





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Tue Oct 05, 2010 11:51 pm
IIWickedDestinyII says...



Hi I was wondering if you could review my Prologue from my novel. Thanks if you do :)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post770292.html?hilit=Invisibles#p770292
One word to say to you
One world to live onto
One person that makes you spin
One song you'll always sing
Show me the way <3





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:16 am
screamandshout says...



viewtopic.php?t=70331

Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.





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Wed Jun 21, 2023 6:18 am
DreamyAlice says...



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