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Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:58 am
SilentRain says...



Hello agian!!
This is a poem I would like for you to review topic70088.html

Thanks,
~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:26 pm
Calligraphy says...



I've read over that poem I don't know how many times now and I can't find anything to help you with. It is perfect. Well, I could have pointed out some grammar mistakes, but other people have already covered that. I wish I could help you, but you have more skill than I do...

Anyone else?

A. S.





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Wed Jan 05, 2011 4:59 pm
Calligraphy says...



Bump - and I now have my reviewer one and two badges YAY!





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Thu Jan 06, 2011 12:21 am
parigirle says...



Hi,
I'd love a review on the first part of my general fiction novel{la}:
topic74327.html

It's not rated 18+... it has a medical aspect, but it's not overly gory or anything. And there's really nothing at all in this part since it's just an introduction.
Thank you,
Pari





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Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:00 pm
Amfliflier says...



Er, this is a tad awkward, but could you review, The New Kid, by me in romantic short stories? Please? I need to know what people think of it! Just, try to not be, too harsh! :)
Forever for All <3

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Fri Jan 21, 2011 7:26 am
Emmzziee says...



Ooooh, it'd be awesome if you could review my poem :D
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Xxx
I want to play a game.





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Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:08 am
Button says...



Hi there :D
Can you please take a look at this poem? I would really, really appreciate it.

Thanks! :)

-Coral-





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Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:20 pm
Amfliflier says...



Here I am again! Could you review my lyrics please? :) topic76465.html
Thanks!
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Mon Feb 19, 2024 6:56 pm
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