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Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:06 am
Mizzle says...



Woo. See that title up there? That, my friends, is my utter fail at trying to come up with something catchy and creative.

Anyways, I figured it was time for me to make one of these threads. To start, let me just say, I will review anything as long as it isn't overly vulgar or crude. I'd like to keep my mind as out of the gutter as I can, thank you very much. However, if it is just cussing or cursing that makes your story 18+, you can count me in.

My Stronger Points
- Art & Photography; honestly, I think the majority of my reviews have been done in this forum.
- Dramatic Poetry
- Other Poetry
- Romantic Novels/Short Stories
- Lyrics
- Lyric Poetry
- General Fiction Short Stories

My Weaker Points
- Non-fiction
- News articles

Status: Closed until further notice

x Mizz
Last edited by Mizzle on Mon Oct 04, 2010 4:17 am, edited 2 times in total.
"Chase your dreams, and remember me, speak bravery,
Because after all, those wings will take you up so high."
-- Owl City, "To the Sky"
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Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:45 pm
Rascalover says...



Hey,
Will you please review chapter 19 of my romance novel. It's about two friends falling in love after a rocky start, because you maybe haven't read the other chapter you wouldn't have to comment on the plot or character develpoment, but if you want too feel free :)

Here's the link if you decide to do it: topic68572.html

Please and Thank you,
Tiffany

P.S. Yay am I your first?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html





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Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:39 pm
blackbird12 says...



Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thanks!

topic68927.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver





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Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:50 am
Mizzle says...



Rascalover, your review is done.
topic68572.html#p759198
If you ever need another review, just tell me! =D

And blackbird, I'm off to do your review right now.
"Chase your dreams, and remember me, speak bravery,
Because after all, those wings will take you up so high."
-- Owl City, "To the Sky"
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:51 am
Mizzle says...



Blackbird, I am sorry for the delay, but my laptop broke down completely. Anyways, your review is done:

topic68927.html#p759873

Okay, guys, I have a bet to fill this month! 100 reviews! So, c'mon, c'mon, give me something to review! =D
"Chase your dreams, and remember me, speak bravery,
Because after all, those wings will take you up so high."
-- Owl City, "To the Sky"
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 1:00 am
HomelessPorcupine says...



Hey Mizzle!

I have one for you so that you can win the bet!

viewtopic.php?t=69054

As an experiment, I've been trying to write in a sort of different style than I usually do, so it isn't exactly my best written story.

Please and thank you!
-HP
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Taran: He will not succeed in this. Somehow, we must find a way to escape. We dare not lose hope.

Fflewddur: I agree absolutely, your general idea is excellent; it's only the details that are lacking.





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Sat Sep 04, 2010 11:02 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there, me again. :smt003 Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks in advance!

topic69098.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver





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Sat Sep 04, 2010 11:36 pm
austenite says...



Hey!!! I'd love it if you could review mine topic69064.html many thanks and gratitude in advance!
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
Oscar Wilde





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Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:57 pm
screamandshout says...



topic69162.html

Would you mind reviewing my poem? Please and thank you.





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Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:20 am
SilentRain says...



Please review this poem for me, topic69218.html Its a poem...
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Wed Jun 21, 2023 6:25 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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