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Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:47 pm
eldEr says...



Alright people, here we go.

I have decided to open up a new thread, because, well, let's all be honest here---I really, really, really, really, really, (you get it) need to start reviewing again!

So, here I am now, on my knees begging you to beg me for a review.
Just post your link with a picture of some sort of food (preferably in a spoiler...>.>) and I will get on it ASAP!
Why do I need a picture of food?
Because, it's funner that way of course!

Now for this part...

What I will review:
Short Stories/Novels
-Fantasy Fiction
-Romantic Fiction
-Action/Adventure Fiction
-Historical Fiction
Okay, so any fiction will do but fan fiction. (Unless it's Ted Dekker fan fiction. In which case I will make an exception!)
I will do novels, but I would prefer it if you asked me to start early on so that I could have a skim through the earlier chapters and get caught up with what's happening quickly.

Poetry
I will review any poetry.
Why?
Because poetry is on my list of favourite methods of venting.
(Somebody shoot me, I just started a sentence with 'Because' o.O)
That and it's epic in general.

Other
I will try my hardest at non-fiction work and essays, though I'm not promising that they will be very good.

I'll also do any rating, just because I love you all so much.

So yeah...
That's about it!
Don't forget my picture of food! :evil:
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:51 pm
Flower~Child says...



Will you review this poem for me? topic68412.html

Spoiler! :
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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Sat Aug 28, 2010 4:05 pm
eldEr says...



First request is done, and by the way, I love the fruit! (I may or may not be addicted to it....>.>)
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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Sat Aug 28, 2010 4:34 pm
Sins says...



Dance with my father in Spain!!!

I have to be honest with you, I'm mostly requesting for a review by you so that I can share my sexy bread with you, but that's beside the point. If you're wondering what I mean by sexy bread.... this is what I mean.

Spoiler! :
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You love it. I have a lot more where that came from, my dear... :smt001

I know that you said you weren't too keen on reviewing random chapters, but yeah... that's what I'm asking for a review on. It's the 7th chapter, I think... he... Go figure. I have a feeling that you actually reviewed the first chapter of this story, come to think of it. I'm not sure though... I have the memory of a dead goldfish. I need to shut up now.

Here it is: topic68772.html

If you don't want to do it, that's fine. I just wanted to share my bread with you... Please and thank you!

Spoiler! :
... I just realised that I've written an essay on your WRRF thread... Sorry. :P
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Sat Aug 28, 2010 9:24 pm
eldEr says...



Wow Skins, that IS some sexy bread!
I just found out a couple of hours ago that we're going on a mini, day and a half long vacation in like...15 minutes.
So, if you can wait that long Skins, I'll be happy to review it for you XD

If anybody else has a request, I hope you're okay with waiting for a little tiny bit!
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:44 am
eldEr says...



Alright, so...I'm back, and I finished your review Skins!
Anybody else?
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:58 am
Crimsona says...



Will you review the first two chapters of my novel please?

novel.php?id=592


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Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:04 am
eldEr says...



Alright!! Finished both of them and I sooo wish that I could eat that brownie! *drools*
Anyways.
Anybody else??
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Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:04 pm
Sins says...



Could you review the next chapter of my story for me, please, Barry?
topic68957.html

You WANT my bannana.
Spoiler! :
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I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:22 pm
eldEr says...



Done!!
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:49 am
lilgreendots says...



Here you go thanks in advance novel.php?id=604

-lilgreenodts
Incarceron is a prison like no other
It gives life
It deals death

It Watches All

Incarceron
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Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:21 pm
eldEr says...



Done! But I still want my food picture1 D=

Anybody else?
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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Thu Sep 02, 2010 4:34 pm
GoldenSkies says...



Hi Isha! I'm looking for another opinion on the first chapter of my story. So if you could review it, that'd be great! topic68930.html

Here's some food:

Spoiler! :
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This is making me hungry. xD Sorry it's kinda big.

Thanks,
GoldenSkies





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Thu Sep 02, 2010 6:43 pm
eldEr says...



Finished it Golden! Lovely cupcakes...which I have a sudden craving for. xD

Next?
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Thu Sep 02, 2010 6:54 pm
Crimsona says...



Spoiler! :
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69053.html

C'mooon, you know you want the yummy cheesecakes! ;D

So, chapter three of The Kirja... will you review it please? Pweeeeety pwease?

topic69053.html
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