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Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:49 am
Nightshade says...



Hi Silent, I would love a review on my latest poem. Here's a link:
topic73125.html
Thanks!
  





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Sat Dec 18, 2010 3:40 am
Eniarrol says...



Could you please reveiw my poem http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73405.html
Thanks :) Its a bit rushed though...
A hero isn’t defined by winning. Loads of heroes die in the effort. Most of them never get any recognition. No, a hero is just somebody who does the right thing when it would be far, far easier to do nothing.


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Mon Dec 20, 2010 9:21 am
Vampyre says...



Hey Silent!

As you may have guessed, I'm here to ask you to please review my poem, Photograph to Sand.
I'm afraid there's a rather long spoiler first, but it's fairly important to read it, so one can start to understand...

Also, while I can usually take harsh criticism, there is a reason why I'm a little touchy about this one (The spoiler will explain)
So please don't be too harsh on the content, but don't feel the need to pussyfoot around if you feel criticism's in order.

Thank you :)
Oh, and the link's in my signature.

Vampyre
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades


  





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Mon Dec 20, 2010 9:57 am
Emmzziee says...



viewtopic.php?t=73335
viewtopic.php?t=73258
Hiyyaahh! It'd be awesome if you could review either one of these poems for me! :D
It's fine if you don't want too... I mean, it looks like you've got 48 others to do too as it is! :) xxxx
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Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:35 pm
Button says...



If you have some time, could you please take a glance at this?

topic73814.html


Thanks so much! :)

-Coral-
  





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Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:00 am
cormacquinn says...



Are you willing to do a chapter instead of poem. I just think your methodology best fits what I am looking for. I know it's not your forte but I would appreciate an attempt.
Attachments
Chapter 1 revised.doc
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-CQR cheers
  





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Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:24 am
RayneBow says...



will you review my poems on my page?
They are under "Featured Works"
I would post the links on here but my computer will not let me copy and paste.

Thanks in advance if you can. :)

---Rayne Bow
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Fri Jun 17, 2011 2:00 pm
meganTQ says...



I don't know if i've stumbled across this too late but I hope not! I've got four poems on here and would love a review for any of them, feel free topick and choose whichever one(s) you like!

topic82519.html#p873328
topic82642.html#p874088
topic82600.html#p873840
topic82647.html#p874116

Thanks, Megan
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