(Just a point- this entire work is in the main character Anna's point of views, so a few details are left out. I wanted the readers to feel just as 'left in the dark' as Anna does.)
Thanks!
Taylor
~formerly Ilovebubbles123
"There's only one thing to do three words for you. Ooh, I love you.
There's only one way to say those three words that's what I'll do. Ooh, I love you. "
Hi, So... Will you review a chapter in the middle of a story? I don't need to know about the plot unless it's the plot within the chapter. I need to get it on someone's radar. Here's the chapter I want you to review (chapter five. I have really short chapters, so not much has past.)http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76467.html Here's the first chapter if you want to start there. viewtopic.php?t=68961 Thanks. If you aren't comfortable reviewing this, could you post on my wall please?
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