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Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:14 am
SporkPunk says...



Hey everyone! I've been debating on putting up a review thread for the past few weeks, and I've finally decided YWS could use another reviewer. :D

What does a punky little spork like you review, anyway?

What I LOVE to review:

General Fiction
Science Fiction <-- perhaps my favorite
Fantasy
Historical Fiction

What I don't mind reviewing:
Action/Adventure
Fan Fiction
Romantic
Non-Fiction
Other

What I will review, but might not give the best critique since I'm not very experienced:
Lyrics
Scripts
Art & Photos

What I probably won't review:
Poetry

I'm not a poet. Though there are a zillion poetry WRFF threads, so don't worry.

NOTE:
I don't care about the rating. E, 12+, 16+, and 18+ are all fine with me. : )

What do I have to do in exhange?
I would LOVE IT if you give me some feedback on my review. I like to know what you think, writers!

Other things that will make me ADORE you, but are optional:
-Sign my wall. It's lonely over there.
-If you have extra time, stop by and review my piece if you're in the mood to review. If not, don't worry about it. :D

So...now you know. What are you waiting for?

I'd love to review for you.
Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.

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Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:13 pm
Hecate says...



Hey ;) Could you please review this for me? Thanks so much :P

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Thu Aug 19, 2010 4:48 pm
SporkPunk says...



You're very welcome! Done!

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Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:28 am
Wolferion says...



Cheers!

Haven't seen you in WRFF before >=0 Good luck in reviewing ^^ There are times when you're flooded, then times when you wonder if you aren't a ghost. Anyways, I've noticed science fiction is maybe your favorite and my current try at novel is science fiction based ( Except the fact the beginning barely shows any science fiction, will come later >.> ).

Would like to ask for a review! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic68392.html

Thank you for reading,
Kyou
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Fri Aug 20, 2010 11:00 am
thegirlandthepen says...



Hey there Spork! :)

I would be most appreciative if you could take a quick look and maybe review these two short extracts I have that are from a Romance/Science Fiction novel I'm working on currently called Heal. (Until I think of something better and less obvious.) I don't want to be greedy, one or the other is fine. I just thought I'd post them both as they're brand new and from the same story.

The links are here:
viewtopic.php?t=68450 - Daisy's first day.
viewtopic.php?t=68480 - The Cat at Midnight.

Thanking you kindly in advance!

-Eddie xo
"If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot. There's no way around these two things that I'm aware of, no shortcut." - Stephen King.

EDDiE. :]

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Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:15 pm
iceprincess says...



Hey there! :D

This, please? It's a short story about --- well, dolls. A kind of dark Toy Story, come to think of it. :wink:

Thank you so much! :D

~iceprincess =]
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.







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Fri Aug 20, 2010 6:22 pm
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You're all very welcome, and might I say, brilliant pieces, all of you! :D

Next, please! :]
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Sun Aug 22, 2010 5:31 pm
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SOMEBODY wants a review. I know you do. :D
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Thu Sep 02, 2010 12:50 pm
Wolferion says...



Cheers!

Has been some time =) I know I won't brighten up your day a lot as I suppose what I ask of is not really new, but I hope you'd enjoy reading it at least a bit ^^ Would like to ask for a review!
Here's the link http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69044.html

Best wishes!
Kyou
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Thu Sep 02, 2010 4:13 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there! Would you please review this for me? Thanks in advance!

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I would have risen from the ground.

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Thu Sep 02, 2010 10:47 pm
SporkPunk says...



Finished with Kyou's (which is great!) and I'll review yours, blackbird, as soon as I'm back from dinner. :D
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Thu Sep 02, 2010 11:42 pm
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Finished! You're welcome, and both pieces were brilliant!

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Thu Sep 02, 2010 11:53 pm
austenite says...



I would love it if you could review either of mine!

topic69064.html

topic68915.html

Many thanks in advance!!
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
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Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:27 pm
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Done! Have been for a while, actually.

Who's next? I'd love to review! :smt003
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