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Mon Oct 11, 2010 7:17 am
MeanMrMustard says...



Your heartfelt desire for reviewing struck a cord in my being that brought me to this thread of yours. When glancing on the words I thought "By all the humors, she does ring with passion for the critical seeing eye! At once I must have at her, to make use of the reviewer's muse!". And as such, I select you Flower~Child, to review my first submission on here. Beat it like a little b%@$% in your review. :smt003

It is here. So lonely.





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Mon Oct 11, 2010 7:41 pm
Flower~Child says...



Done! Next?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Thu Oct 14, 2010 11:29 am
Flower~Child says...



Come on guys! I need to review! Please comment.
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Thu Oct 14, 2010 6:11 pm
Tigersprite says...



Could you please review this:

viewtopic.php?t=70702

Thanks!

TIGERSPRITE
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Thu Oct 14, 2010 11:58 pm
Flower~Child says...



Done :) Next?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Fri Oct 15, 2010 1:40 am
SilentRain says...



Hello!

This is a poem, topic70684.html

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Fri Oct 15, 2010 2:32 am
captain.classy says...



viewtopic.php?t=70045

If you would do this I would be eternally greatful.





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Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:03 pm
Flower~Child says...



Done! Next please?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:13 am
cannoncomplex says...



hey, flower child...can you review this piece for me?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic70549.html
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Sat Oct 16, 2010 2:07 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey there, Flower! :smt002
I have seen you a lot around the site but never did we interact. So could you possibly review something for the novel which I and Bluewaterlily are writing? I think that won't be much since it's only the prologue and the chapter-1.

Link: Till Death Do Us Apart

Thanks a lot in advance! :D

P.S. I can review something for you, if you like. I'm not that good at poetry, though.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sat Oct 16, 2010 8:14 pm
Warrior Princess says...



Ello, poppet. Review anything of mine you like, just PLEASE review something! (Preferably one of my newer works.) I'm desperate for feedback, and of course yours is very highly valued. ;)
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Tue Oct 19, 2010 2:37 pm
Flower~Child says...



Nearly finished, sorry for the wait. Any more?
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Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:54 pm
FRAYEDjade says...



I'd love it if you ripped up my poem. --> post775969.html#p775969

Thank you!
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Fri Oct 22, 2010 9:25 pm
Flower~Child says...



Done, next?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Mon Oct 25, 2010 11:35 am
Flower~Child says...



Come on guys...please...
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.









We are all broken. That's how the light gets in.
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