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Wed Oct 27, 2010 1:40 am
Flower~Child says...



Come on guys....do I have to beg?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:49 pm
carbonCore says...



Hello, Flower!
I have seen some of your reviews elsewhere on this site, and was left with a rather high opinion of your reviewing ability. Please review my new story Ash - it is either fantasy or sci-fi, I'm not 100% sure myself. Don't worry about things like grammar and spelling, I think my ability in both of those areas is at least adequate. Instead, I'd like a comment on what you liked about it and what you didn't, I find that helps me the most.

Thank you!
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Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:46 pm
SilentRain says...



Hello! Poem for you to review! topic70744.html

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:04 am
Flower~Child says...



Done and done! Next?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Mon Nov 01, 2010 8:52 pm
Flower~Child says...



I have a free day tomorrow so get in some good reviews.
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:46 pm
SilentRain says...



Hello! This is another poem, topic71436.html
It doesn't have a title yet, think oyu could suggest one?? thank!

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Tue Nov 02, 2010 12:27 am
Flower~Child says...



Ready for some more!
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Tue Nov 02, 2010 5:58 pm
Idraax says...



Hello Flower~Child! Thanks for giving me some of your work to rewiew. Do you mind reviewing either a chapter of my novel-in-the-works or some of my really old and somewhat mortifying(for me at least) writing? You can pick, but if you decide to rewiew the second one, please read the warning before the last story/snippet; it's there for a reason. If you don't want to read the story after reading the warning, that's ok. I felt like that was not my best piece anyway. Thanks for the requests and for reading this post, even if you don't rewiew! :)
some of my really old and somewhat mortifying works
my-novel-in-the-works
Check these out please! :)
Alezrani
Will review for food thread





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Tue Nov 02, 2010 11:18 pm
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Flower~Child says...



I'll have that reviewed in no time, in the mean time does anyone else want a lovely review?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Fri Nov 05, 2010 4:26 pm
Flower~Child says...



Come on dears I need something to review!
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Sun Nov 07, 2010 5:15 pm
LadySpark says...



Hey Flow! you asked me for a review so I am going to do the same :) :smt003 :mrgreen: :smt002 :smt001 :?: :!: :arrow:

I have several works I'd like you to review so I'm just going to give you a link to my portfolio and you can go from there!

Please review:
~The voyage of Kato
~The wood series
and if your up to it
~fire bird
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/member18842.html

please if you can only review one thing review the wood series :)

thanks!
~Pointe
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Formerly SparkToFlame





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Sun Nov 07, 2010 5:42 pm
LittlePrincess says...



Hi, I know you said short stories but I have a romantic novel and I would greatly appreciate a review
novel.php?id=374
Here's the novel but If you want to choose one chapter to do I wouldn't mind, whatever works for you!
And if you want anything reviewed in return I would gladly do it, you can PM me or post a link on your review and i'll get to it as soon as I can.
Thanks so much! :)
"One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
The Little Prince





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Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:47 pm
PaperCrane says...



Could you give this one a review, or even just an opinion?

viewtopic.php?t=71701
I wasn't born to mourn, but I mourn the day
I stand here alone:
Fighting my heart for dreams, my mind for hope





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Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:35 pm
Flower~Child says...



All done, next?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Fri Nov 12, 2010 1:28 am
Idraax says...



Could you do my short scene Drift, please? Lava commented on it, but she didn't say much. :(
Check these out please! :)
Alezrani
Will review for food thread








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