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Tue Jul 23, 2013 11:39 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Finished, Hero!

Anybody else?
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
  





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Wed Jul 24, 2013 3:45 pm
Sins says...



Taaammmmmmm, hi.

Could you be awesome and check out the latest/fourth chapter my my novel for me? Copying and pasting isn't working on my laptop for whatever reason, but I've posted the link on my wall so you can get to it via there if ya like.

Also, I'm not sure if you've read the second and third chapters, but either way don't worry about reviewing those ones!

Thanking you!
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Wed Jul 24, 2013 5:44 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Reviewed! (And all the other chapters too, because I promised I would earlier)

Who else would like a review? :)
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Thu Jul 25, 2013 9:17 pm
sylviaelioness says...



I would really appreciate it if you could review my prologue:
Myrchase: Prologue

Thanks!
Sylvia.
Sylvia.
  





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Sat Jul 27, 2013 7:17 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done! Anyone wanna make a special review day request? :D
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Sat Jul 27, 2013 10:29 pm
bluewaterlily says...



Could you please review the first chapter of my fantasy novel? The Artemis Trials

Thanks. :)
"A poet is, before anything else, a person who is passionately in love with language." - W.H. Auden
  





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Mon Jul 29, 2013 6:33 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done! Who's next? (:
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Mon Jul 29, 2013 7:44 pm
BreBre says...



Hey is the link to new work I just posted
Fire
  





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Thu Aug 01, 2013 3:18 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done! Next?
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
  





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Mon Aug 05, 2013 5:37 pm
EnigmaticSpirit says...



Here it is!

Head Case
Words cut deeper than knives.
  





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Tue Aug 06, 2013 1:29 pm
Benrobertringrose says...



Hi ArcticMonkey,

I've noticed some of your reviews on pieces of work and they look awesome and incredibly helpful! Would really appreciate it if you could find the time to review this:

Bored Games

Thank you in advance,

Regards Ben
  





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Sat Aug 10, 2013 2:01 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done, done, and done! Next?
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Wed Aug 14, 2013 11:18 am
runawaylove says...



Hey! Can you please review my poem The Nomad ?
  





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Fri Aug 16, 2013 5:44 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Done ^^ Who's next?
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