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Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:00 pm
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ArcticMonkey says...



Yo 8)

[05-04-13] So I'm bringing this thread back to life, because I need to review more! And your requests would help me a lot with that :D

What I review?
I will review pretty much anything. My stronger points are lyrics and short stories; however I can review anything. So please, request away!

~Arc
p.s. Sorry for opening and closing this reviewing thread so much, it's just that I've been swamped with school work. Thanks for understanding!
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Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:05 pm
Hecate says...



Hey! Do you want to review this for me? Thought I'd start it out for you, since I need help too! It's a win-win situation ;)

I'm warning you, it's a really old piece, from when I was younger and though I tried to do a bit of editing, it's not great. Need help ;)

topic68036.html

Thank you!!

Oh, it's fantasy fiction btw. Well not yet, it doesn't sound very fantasy like, but it will be.
  





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Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:41 am
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Done. Tell me when you get the next part up!

Anyone else?
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Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:24 pm
Hecate says...



Hey!
Thanks for your crit ;)
Here's the first part already edited as well as a bit more!
That is if you want to have a look. And if you do, thanks so much!
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Tue Aug 10, 2010 4:15 pm
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Anyone else want a review? Come on!
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Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:35 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



I have something for you to review. It's in Lyric Poetry. Truth Thanks in advance
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Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:31 pm
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Done!
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Tue Aug 10, 2010 10:48 pm
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post751019.html#p751019

It's a general fiction short story that i would love to have reviewed. Please and thank you
  





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Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:28 am
ArcticMonkey says...



Done! Anyone else?
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Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:33 pm
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Review the third chapter of Popularity Wars, please! Weird how I'm asking someone my own age...lol!!
Please follow me on all my writing quests by clicking "Follow" on my Profile. Thanks!

Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!
  





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Thu Aug 12, 2010 4:29 pm
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Done WW! For future reference could you include a link? Thanks!
EDIT: I know it's in your signature now, but I didn't notice that earlier on
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Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:26 pm
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Hey Tam_ara!

Would you mind reviewing post751919.html#p751919 for me? It's a general fiction/nonfiction/prose-poetry sort of thing, and very short. Pretty pretty please? :D
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Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:54 pm
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Someone else request please!
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Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:46 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey Tammy, I am here for the first time. So, be of some help. Haha!

I am not sure if you would like reviewing this, but it's a Non-fiction piece and I need help urgently. Anyways, here's the link:Character Protects Life

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Mon Aug 23, 2010 8:54 pm
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Done and dusted! Sorry, I just felt like saying that. Anyone else care for a review? :)
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