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Razzker's Razztazztic Reviews



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Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:44 am
Razzker says...



Razzker's Razztazztic Reviews is now OPEN for business!

What I Review

I will gladly review your work. I do specialize in Fantasy and Science Fiction, though.
I will review your work if it successfully piques my interests. There could be several exceptions that I'm willing to make.
It is unlikely that I will review your work. Unless it successfully captures my interest, don't hope for too much.
No, thank you.

Fantasy
Science Fiction
Romance
General Fiction
Action/Adventure
Historical Fiction
Other Fiction
Poetry
Lyrics
Scripts
Fanfiction
Non-fiction
Photography
Original Artwork


Format For My Reviews (For Short Stories/Novels)

Plot: Out of 10
I will go over how smoothly the plot flows throughout the entire story/chapter. If the story is not completed yet, this score might be lowered, but that's only because I don't know the entire story yet. In short, the score here might change.
Character: Out of 10
I will focus on the nature of the characters' dialogue, the way they act and react. I will also deal with characterization, character development and interaction in this sub-topic.
Syntax, word choice and punctuation: Out of 10
I won't nitpick a lot, but I will comment on the grammar and sentence structure of your story. Also, I might advise on certain word choices to fit the context. I might also suggest words from a particular semantic field to help your story convey its message. As for punctuation, I'll just mention a few misplaced commas there, a missing full stop here etc.
Theme: Out of 10
The message, tone and feel of the entire piece. A story can be beautifully written and be artistically poetic, but it could contain an ambiguous or, even worse, no theme at all.

Ratings
I will review any story with any rating. I can handle explicit content, violence and other mature content. Also, I can be very open-minded, so if you have a story that may contain controversial undertones/topics (homosexuality, racism, religion and theology etc.) I will still review it.

Please post a request in this thread. Take note that I could be busy with high school so I might not be able to review your work immediately, but I will eventually. Also, if I am swamped with school work, there's a chance that I might not be able to review your work at all. But PM me if you really need a review and I will arrange a compromise. :smt003

I do not need anything in return. It is up to you whether you reward me or not. :D

- Razzker -
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Points: 1855
Reviews: 56
Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:59 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thanks in advance!

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Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:31 am
Razzker says...



Sure thing, blackbird! : )
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Thu Jun 22, 2023 9:05 am
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