Young Writers Society

If you're in need of a free review then you've come to the right place.

What I review:
Fantasy
Romance
Art/Photography
Poetry(I'm not the best, but I'm getting better)
General Fiction
Other
Scripts

What I don't review:
Fan fiction(Maybe if it's something like Harry Potter or Percy Jackson)
Vampire stories
Nonfiction
Science Fiction

What I may do:
Action/Adventure novels
Historical Fiction

If you want me to review one of these genres then write a short summary of the plot, and I'll determine whether or not I'll review your literary piece.

When Requesting a review:
When requesting a review pleaese include the link, title, and genre of your literary work. As long as your work isn't 18+ I'll review your work. Unlike most people, I'll review a chapter that isn't the first chapter for a novel. All I ask is that you give me a sentence or two about your novel. And lastly, I would appreciate what you want me to focus on for your review.

Doesn't anyone want a free review?

Hey WaterLily

You sure you feel like reviewing? This piece, which doesn't have a title per se, but is about a battle, has received some fantastic reviews already, but I'm the kind of person that doesn't post anything unless I want it torn to shreds and poked to bits. And I can only handle so much of that So I only post one thing, and would really like lots of reviews on it.

I've changed it extensively from the first review, and even more so from the current last review. If you could, I'd like you to focus on whether it was realistic, what you really disliked and what can be improved I realize that's a lot. If nothing else, I would like to know whether or not the dialogue rings true in your ears.

Thanks in advance if you decide to review, Jai

Thanks, seeminglymeaningless. I'm so glad someone finally requested a review; you're my first costumer(I don't know what word to use ) But, I'll get to it tomorrow since it's so late, but I'll have a look at it, and I'll P.M. you when it is posted.

Would you please review the 18th chapter of my romance novel Let Me Love You. topic67849.html#p748663


The story is about a young couple who were friends, but fell in love after she was in a car accident.

Because you haven't read the beginning chapters I would like for you to focus on grammar, and whatever else you think needs fixing.
thanks

Okay, Rascalover. I'm on it.

Ok, thanks P.M. When you post it please.

Will do.

Hi! My name is Regan, and I would LOVE if you would review my story! I only have the prologue and the 1st chapter, I'm going to post the 2nd chapter tonight or tomorrow. It's an action adventure, but it has a fantasy twist kinda. The story is about a girl who lives a normal life in a city that is on what used to be New York. She was kidnapped one day and woke up in a room with other people from all over the world. They are told that only one person can make it back home, the rest will be killed. Whoever makes it to the top first is let out. Each level presents new challenges, which get harder as you get higher. She fights for her life in this twisted game made by a crazy man.

I would love it if you would review the story for me! (It's called Racing to Death btw)
<3 Regan

novel.php?id=797

Sure thing. I'll be sure to review your novel. Sounds good. Can't wait to read it.

Hey, blue.

Would you mind checking out the first chapter of my novel for me...? There's a prologue, but you shouldn't desperately need to read that, I don't think.

I've recently edited it, so I'd love some new opinions on it!

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Please and thank you!

Hey could you review my romantic short story. Its called the "The Mixtape Diaries: Do It Like You Do it to Me".
It's about a girl who sends her crush an anonymous carnation during Valentine's Day and what happens as a result.

Here's the link: topic72361.html

Skins and aestar, I'll do your reviews in a few days.

Umm, hello. I was wondering if you'd like to review my work which is entitled 'Light and Shadow'. Here's the first chapter - viewtopic.php?t=69576. I have written and posted 5 chapters so far. Anyway, I came here 'cause I saw 2 comments on my blog post suggesting that I should come here (I read them late though >.<). Gosh. I'm actually feeling shy. xD I believe, this is the first time I posted on the community forums...

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE