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Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:39 am
gsppcrocks10 says...



D'you want a review? How about a couple?

Things that I will review:

Any fiction as long as it's relatively short, photos/drawings, some poetry if I'm in a good mood.

Things that I will not review

Nonfiction, or lyrics.

A warning, I tend to tear things to shreds, so don't ask unless you're willing to read through me pointing out every single tiny little grammatical and spelling error. Also, I'm usually rather fast with my reviews. You should be able to expect one within an hour unless the real world calls me.
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Just another quack spouting psychobabble.

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Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:00 am
Flower~Child says...



Will you review my poem? topic67459.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:02 pm
Sins says...



Heyooo :)

Would you mind reviewing a chapter of my novel for me? It's the third chapter so it's not too far in and you'll be able to understand it fine. If you don't review random chapters though, that's fine.

topic67521.html

Thankssss.
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Mon Aug 02, 2010 4:31 pm
NYCnightowl007 says...



Hey there! Would you review my first chapter called Bikes and Books? Thanks a lot. :D viewtopic.php?t=67660
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Mon Aug 02, 2010 5:49 pm
Lena.Wooldridge says...



topic67676.html

Thank you.
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Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:35 pm
AngerManagement says...



Hey, could you review this for me please. Thank you topic67782.html
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Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:34 am
gsppcrocks10 says...



I'll get to your stuff tomorrow, k? Right now I'm really tired.

And Skins, sorry, but your thing was a little long. xD
Just another quack spouting psychobabble.

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Thu Jun 22, 2023 9:14 am
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