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Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:20 pm
LittlePetRock says...



Okay guys. I'm going to try this again. Everytime I open up a WRFF thread, something catastrophic happens in my life, and YWS gets left in the dust for a while. :| Let's hope this doesnt happen again, and I can actually do my part!

LPR's Hard-Rockin' Reviews!


Let me review your work!
Why? Because I'm horrible at browsing the forums trying to find something to review. Lead the Rock to your piece, and I shall review. 8)
I will give you my honest opinion (whether you like it or not), point out any grammatical mistakes that I may find, and maybe even throw in a few nit-picks. :P


What I LOVE to review:
Photography - I am well experienced in this field, and I'd love to share my opinion and knowledge with my fellow shutter-bugs!
Short Stories - I love them!

What I will review:
Action/Adventure
Fantasy
Romantic
Science-Fiction
General Fiction

What I don't like to review, but I'll do it anyways:
Historical Fiction
Non-Fiction
Art
Lyrics
Poetry (all types accepted)

What I WILL NOT review:
18+ Rated work
Fan-Fiction
Scripts


So please, give me the link to the piece and a brief description, and I'll have your review done within three days. (If not, just PM me over and over again until it's done.) :D 8)
Star light; star bright,
It is time to take flight.
Off I go through the dark of night.
All my hopes and dreams in sight.





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Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:36 am
LittlePetRock says...



You guys are killing me.
Really, so many requests! I don't know if I can ever finish them all! :lol:
Star light; star bright,
It is time to take flight.
Off I go through the dark of night.
All my hopes and dreams in sight.





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Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:51 am
sodapoplunchbox says...



LittlePetRock, can you review my story called The Decoy Dream? ( novel.php?id=463) Chapter one or two is fine, whichever. If you want, I'll even review one of your stories! (:
Thank you!
-SodapopLunchbox
I hope you like the stars I stole for you,
One hundred million twinkle lights in neon blue.
I'll be the brightest,
You'll see!





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Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:16 am
tigs6969 says...



Hi, wouldnt mind a review on this
topic65975.html chapter 1
topic66117.html chapter 2, please use this chapters novel feature to get 3,4 as 1 got mixed up... long complicated matter
As you may see everyone has gone through and nitpicked so I just mainly wanna know how you like the plot, how the dialogue is reading for the girls as im a 21 year old male :P
thanks





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Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:07 pm
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LittlePetRock says...



sodapoplunchbox, your's is finished!
tigs6969: I'm working on them now!
Star light; star bright,
It is time to take flight.
Off I go through the dark of night.
All my hopes and dreams in sight.





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Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:21 pm
LittlePrincess says...



Hi Rock!
If you ever have time I'd really appreciate a review for my novel: novel.php?id=374

There's a lot of chapters so I won't be offended if you don't wanna do all of them :D Just whichever ones you feel like doing I guess, Thank you!
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Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:02 am
Flower~Child says...



I have a poem.. topic67459.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Thu Jun 22, 2023 9:17 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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