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Fri Aug 05, 2011 6:31 pm
Sins says...



Aaaaand, I'm back. :twisted:

When you find the time, would you mind reviewing the next part of my novel for me, please? I'm a pain in the butt, I know. >.<

viewtopic.php?t=85423

Thanks in advance! (Also, Paul wants to know if Ribbit's up for a dinner date tonight. He's thinking seafood.)
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Fri Aug 05, 2011 7:09 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Hrrmm. A Rachael Elg review. I wonder how difficult that is to swallow.

Would you mind reviewing this for me please: topic85389.html
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522
  





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Sat Aug 06, 2011 9:18 pm
azntwinz2 says...



Ribbit is Awesome!

Hi, Rachael.
Can you review the first chapter for me? Thanks!
topic85468.html
Please make sure to check out my portfolio! Any comments are immensely desired!
  





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Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:09 pm
RacheDrache says...



*brushes off dust*
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Mon Jan 30, 2012 12:12 pm
schoutenoutloud says...



Hi, this is the first in a seven part 'set' of short stories I'm doing for my ext 2 major work. It's based on an old children's rhyme/superstition for counting crows, and goes: "one for sorrow, two for joy, three for a girl, four for a boy, five for silver, six for gold, seven for a secret never to be told."

my main concerns are about whether it's too angsty or contrived, and about whether it's clear what happens to the character, but any other feedback would also be great thanks :)
work.php?id=93083

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Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:07 am
Kafkaescence says...



work.php?id=93914

Take a shot at it.

EDIT: And while I'm at it, would you mind looking at this one as well?

work.php?id=94009
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Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:50 pm
zohali93 says...



RABBIT IS AWESOME!

HI THERE! i wrote a novel but im pretty sure its got problems (nobody reviews so i don't know where) i split my chapter one because it was too much for me to write. could you please review it if you've got time???

thanks

its called untold hidden secrets

work.php?id=93995
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Sat Mar 17, 2012 6:46 am
xLogan says...



Ribbit is awesome, girl!

work.php?id=94052 -- You read the first part of my story, Taking Over -- you reviewed part of it earlier; I added quite a bit and edited it as well.

It's a short-story as of now, fiction; I like to call it a political-tragedy story. The president declares himself, "President for life," or so to say. Thanks!
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Sat Mar 17, 2012 3:17 pm
Pilot says...



How about my poem (which I know you don't like to review),

work.php?id=94059

Which I don't write a lot of them.

I can also throw in this:

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Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:22 pm
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Sins says...



Because I'm such a lovely person, I thought I'd add to your pile of reviews to do. Sorry.

Um, yeah, basically, I've written a new chapter of Stop and Stare that I'd very much appreciate you opinion on. It's a chapter that's been added in near the front of the novel that describes Zoey's sister's funeral because I felt it was needed and yeah, cat, so when you find the time, could you please check it out?

work.php?id=94023

Thanks so much!

P.S. Paul says Ribbit is awesome. And sexy. (He's on heat. Sorry.)
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Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:23 pm
RacheDrache says...



Oh, goodness, what happens when you don't have notifications to remind you!

I shall get on these right away, tadpoles!
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Mon Mar 19, 2012 10:04 pm
Pilot says...



Ignore the poem, if you want. Chapter one of my novel:

work.php?id=94100

Thanks so much :)

Spoiler! :
It's science fictiony! :O
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Fri Mar 23, 2012 6:45 pm
Pilot says...



You seemed to like the overall plot of Ch 1, so here's Ch 2 :)

work.php?id=94173

Thanks!
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Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:11 pm
RacheDrache says...



Review, Rach, review like the Ribbit!
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Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:10 pm
Jas says...



work.php?id=94229

Would you mind reviewing that? Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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