Young Writers Society

If you review my work I will give you a hundred thousand spider eyes wrapped in a pretty red box with a pretty purple ribbon sitting pretty under an electrocuted Christmas tree.

Gimmee! But what would you like me to review that I haven't already?

....rain check on that?

If you review for me, I'll be your best friend.

Haley: of course
Sydney: but, I thought? *sniff* *cries*

And all that aside, who wants a critique? Seriously wants one?

Pfft, now this is what you call a bribe.



If you review something for me, this hot dude is all yours. Granted.

This is the sixth chapter of my story. You gave me a really good review on the fourth chapter, so I thought I'd be greedy and ask for another.

This one's the fifth chapter of the story. You don't have to review this one, it's up to you really. It's just if you feel that you want to or whatever.

Remember... that hot dude is yours if you want him...

Oh.... um. Why... thank you! But you know, this time I'm just feeling generous, so the review's on me. I'm serious.

(And, reviewed.)

Hey!

Can you do this one for me?
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Thanks much. ^^

Hello! So I was wondering if you might review We All Are Birds. for me? Pretty pwease?

I haven't written anything in a VERY long time, and I'm just started to get back in the groove of things, so please be honest and tell me what I need to work on.

So I'm not amazing at bribes but....here's a cookie! And cookies are always yummy Also, a witty homeless man!

Thank you so much!
-Once

Heya Rach

It looks as though you're kind of busy at the moment, but when you get the time, could you please review the next part of my story for me? It's kind of long, I hope you don't mind...! Take as long as you want.

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I'm sure you will be extremely tempted by my bribe...

If you're still not convinced... how about this sexy beast?


Please and thank you!

Heylo! I was wondering if you would please do a review for 'The Kirja'?

I do have a website for it, but the critique from the people on it doesn't go much above

'gd. grammer probs tho.'

Dx So I'd really like some honest, helpful advice on what I need to improve on.

As a bribe... I was thinking;

This wonderful selection of vampire tongues, displayed in this quality crystal cabinet. They're guaranteed to make you sparkle more than... more than... urm... They'll make you sparkle, m'kay?

And if that's not good enough for you. What about these quality *cough*madeofplastic*cough* geese? Coming in full halloween costume?
Here's a preview of these fantastic... things!

Whoa, I wander off for a few days and an explosion!

Everyone, I'll get there as soon as I can!

All reviewed! Phew!

Who's next?

I just want to say, you are a freaking superhero.

ladymask wrote:I just want to say, you are a freaking superhero.

Yes, you are.

I have returned... mwhahahaha. Ha. I've posted the next chapter of my story and I'd be ever so grateful if you unleashed your reviewing powers on it and reviewed it for me. If you agree to review, you get him.



I was actually going to give you this guy,
but then I realised that the first guy was way hotter.

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Thank you!!