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Wed Sep 01, 2010 5:12 am
RacheDrache says...



You know, I really don't need much payment, Skins. The second guy will do perfectly.

(Reviewed.)
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Wed Sep 01, 2010 5:47 am
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Guess, I'll give this a try . . .

If you review The Land of Spirits (Chap. One) I will give you . . . *rummages through desk drawer* The Super Secret Manuscripts for Harry Potter: Book 8, Twilight Saga: Book 16, The Bible: 2010 Edition and . . . 2 paper clips, an old cracked flash drive, 13 chewed pencils, and a roll of tape! :D


Please? Quick Synopsis:

Two boys find themselves stuck in a land of ghosts and spirits. If they want to get home, they must do so fast, because time is running out.
There are those that live in the past. Those who focus on the present. I strive to be Futuristic.
  





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Thu Sep 02, 2010 8:57 pm
RacheDrache says...



I've been in desperate need of 2 paper clips...

Anyway, reviewed, Futuristic!
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:39 pm
Kiwisatsuma says...



Hi! Would you be able to review this for me? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post760055.html#p760055

If you do, you get this cat dressed as a frog!

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And if you don't... I'll come to your house and write 'wash me!' in the dust on your car, and then your shame will know no end. And if you don't have a car, I'll write it in tiny lettering on your bicycle. There is no escape!

..pretty please? :)
  





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Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:02 pm
ladymask says...



(That cat-frog might be the most disarmingly appealing gift for her on this thread, I think :D)
you're scared of basic emotions
you say that they're fragile just like china cups
  





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Tue Sep 07, 2010 9:05 pm
Sins says...



I'm back to stalk you. :D

post761155.html#p761155 - I would love for you to review this for me, pleaseeee?

Thanks in advance!

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Thu Sep 23, 2010 3:27 pm
ultraviolet says...



Hey, mind reviewing this short story for me? I've Already Tried ~contest entry~

No? Well, what if I give you several books stolen from my sister's room (it's scary full of boy-crazed romances in there), a six pack of multicolored mechanical pencils, and a dozen smilies? 8) :D :P :mrgreen: :smt003 :smt004 :smt002 :pirate2: :pirate3: :wink: :) :smt003 Please and thank you!
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Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:00 pm
Reuben A says...



Ey please review my Canonoscuridad Part 1 :) I'll give you...
*Thinks intently for several hours*
Ah...
*Continues thinking*
I got it!! I'll give you a lesson on the mating rituals of the undead bread crumbs from the planet Gobbledegook#273!124wz from the galaxy of...ummm.... well yeah... :D :D :D
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?
  





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Sat Oct 09, 2010 8:30 am
Jashael says...



RachaelElg wrote:You know, I really don't need much payment, Skins. The second guy will do perfectly.

(Reviewed.)


Ahh! I was so sad to see that your thread is closed. But why are people still posting?! And when I clicked the "reply" button the title has an "open!" in parentheses and I just feel like you're such a perfect reviewer for my character--a girl who has entered her teens five years ago who would rather fantasize about being inducted in some surreptitious agency than to learn how to concoct a succulent dish which she might actually find practical and useful in future matters. Please do review me LOL
Here's the link:
novel.php?id=661

It's Fantasy. :))
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Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:46 pm
RacheDrache says...



All right, I am nearly all caught up! Now accepting more requests...
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Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:09 pm
Jashael says...



YAY! Chapter two please? =P post776026.html#p776026 Thank you!!!
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Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:01 am
Elinor says...



Hey Rach, could you review this flash for me? It's called Heaven and it's in Historical Fiction.

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Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:01 am
Bickazer says...



Heyyy, would you mind taking a look at the prologue and first chapter of my novel?

topic70759.html

Thanks a lot in advance.
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Fri Oct 22, 2010 5:54 pm
Tigersprite says...



Do you think you could look at this if you have the time: topic71000.html

Thanks in advance,

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Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:38 am
RacheDrache says...



All right... nearly caught up! Now accepting new requests...
I don't fangirl. I fandragon.

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