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Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )



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Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:14 am
jDawn says...



Hello Everyone! I'm jdawn ( Jessica ) here and if you need a review on a piece of writing... then post a request here! I'll do it for free in a matter of two days at most.

Notices
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- I will not review books rated 18 and over. No exceptions
- I don't ask for anything back at all, just a smile. : )

I Enjoy Reviewing...

- Science Fiction
- Action/Adventure
- Fantasy

I'm Alright With Reviewing...

- Romance
- Poetry
- Fan Fiction

I'm Not Great At Reviewing...

- Scripts
- Lyrics
- Art & Photography

Though I will review anything, just ask!

:mrgreen: Thank you! I am happy to review anybody!
Last edited by jDawn on Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:20 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Mon Jul 12, 2010 8:00 pm
GuntaFX says...



Hey, can you review this for me por favor :)
viewtopic.php?t=66782
General Short Story
E for Everyone
Be as harsh as you want, I can take it *braces self.
Appreciated

Lewis





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Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:29 pm
jDawn says...



All finished! thanks for stopping by! I'm open anytime! : )
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:12 pm
jDawn says...



Attention Customers! I will be gone until Saturday due to a camp. I will be taking review requests once again on Saturday. If you leave a request, You will be automatically reviewed on Saturday! Thank you and sorry for the inconvenience!
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3





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Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:18 am
Talulahbelle says...



Hey Jessica! Hope you have fun at your camp. If you don't mind, could you take a look at this when you get back? There's no rush. It's an old story that I'm going back to and I wanted to see if there's anything I should keep in mind as I continue it. Thanks so much!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=56555
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Wed Aug 25, 2010 10:49 pm
jDawn says...



Okay, I'm back open for buisness! Drop by a request anytime!

Thanks,

Jessica
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:05 pm
Wariofart says...



Hey, it's cool you've opened back up! If you want, can you review my poem "I Wish I Could Tell You". Do you do poetry? Anyway, thanks in advance.

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(piece-by-piece reviews are awesome btw!)

EDIT: Wow, my poem is getting a lot of reviews. So don't feel like you have to review this. However, a lot of them are just general thoughts, so if you want to do an in-depth/edit of my poem, that'd be awesome. But please don't feel forced to review it! :smt001
"This is a song for a scribbled out name
That my love keeps writing again and again
And again"





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Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:08 pm
jDawn says...



Yeah sure I'll review it! I do poery, though it is kinda awkward to me. Oh well, I can manage. :D By the way, congrats on your poem being so popular!
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3





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Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:31 pm
jDawn says...



Finished! : D
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" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Mon Oct 11, 2010 8:49 pm
jDawn says...



Would Anybody Like A Review??
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Tue Oct 12, 2010 4:40 pm
Sins says...



Heya, Jessica :)

Would you mind reviewing something for me...? The issue is that it's an eleventh chapter! Taking that into account, if you don't want to review it, that's fine. I'd just like to see what impression it gives off to someone who hasn't read the previous chapters.

topic70405.html

Thanks!
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Tue Oct 12, 2010 8:16 pm
jDawn says...



Sure, and just wanted to let you know that I have been reading A Shot Of Arrogance all along. : D Love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:19 pm
jDawn says...



Finished! And Skins, sorry I couldn't find anything! ; D I think that's a good thing!
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Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:56 pm
Bickazer says...



Hey Jessica, mind taking a look at something of mine? It's the prologue and the first part of the first chapter (whew, that's a mouthful...) of my fantasy novel, Munera:

viewtopic.php?t=70759

Thanks a lot in advance! ^^
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Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:21 pm
jDawn says...



Finished! Awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3








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