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Wed Oct 20, 2010 10:00 pm
FRAYEDjade says...



Hi Jessica, would you mind taking a look at this poem? post775969.html#p775969
Thanks!

By the way, I love your signature. ATL =<3
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Thu Oct 28, 2010 1:14 am
napalmerski says...



And me, and me, and me, and mine, and that thing here I did...
topic71029.html
please :shock:
she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness.
Robert Howard





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Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:53 am
Roal says...



Hey, I wonder if you can review my Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer.
topic70833.html - Chapter 1
post777155.html - Chapter 2 - Part 1

It's kind of historic-ish ( I don't really have the time to go and research ) and romance like. LoL

Thanks 8D

P.S - I was a little bit lazy/busy to fix my chapter 1 so it's still in a rough draft type.
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.





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Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:46 pm
Jashael says...



Please review this: post763536.html#p763536 =)) thanks!
“I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen:
not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”

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Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:23 pm
jDawn says...



I got almost everybody finished, i'll try and get Roal's done a.s.a.p.
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3





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Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:42 am
Jashael says...



hi, jessica.=)) please? topic71543.html
“I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen:
not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”

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Mon Nov 08, 2010 9:52 pm
jDawn says...



Okay, finished Jash!
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3





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Fri Jun 23, 2023 3:45 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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