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Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:56 am
kingolions says...



This is one way of doing things. I'll review for a small fee of $9.98 US. Joking. That's no fun. Free reviews. Conditions:

Will Not Review
Novels
Some short stories
Twilight under any circumstances
If anything else, will be informed

-Only review most short stories and some novels under certain circumstances.

-Will review any rated work (Unless topics have said will not review)

-Reviews at writer's own risk.

-Cannot be blamed for any loss of hair or deaths of cats (fish may be my fault)
Last edited by kingolions on Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.





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Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:13 pm
Day says...



Here is the second chapter of a novel I'm writing.

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A note is that you DO NOT need to read the first chapter because every chapter it will switch between two characters. Thus this chapter is completely unrelated, as of now, to the first chapter. If you plan on reading future chapters than it will make much more sense if you read the first one.
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Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:09 am
kingolions says...



Hey Day. I did a review on the chapter, but it may not be that great. I don't usually review novels.





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Thu Jun 22, 2023 8:57 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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