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Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:35 am
NYCnightowl007 says...



Hello everyone! I've got myself some free time this summer, so I will be happy to review your: General Fiction, Romantic Fiction (nothing 16+ or 18+ please), Action/Adventure Fiction, or Science Fiction. I can review short stories or novels. In addition, I can review up to 4 chapters in the same novel in any of these categories.

I try to give positive feedback as well as constructive criticism, as every piece has something good in it. I will also try to be a quick as possible with your request. :D

Two requests per person, please. (If you ask me to review more then one of you novel's chapters, that counts as one.)

Have a bright day!
Chrissie
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Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:08 am
MiaParamore says...



Hey well your first reviewer! I would like to get this reviewed, and it would be ideal if you could get on it as soon as possible.

Link: Chilly Farm

Thanks in advance and I can pay back the favour whenever you want. I would be glad to review something for you. :)

~Shubhi
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Or break it, break it off
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Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:26 pm
butterflyflutterby2 says...



Wondering if you can Review this for me ??? :)

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Thanks you :)
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Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:02 pm
NYCnightowl007 says...



Shubhi, I will review yours first, then butterflyflutterby2's is next. :)
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Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:01 pm
screamandshout says...



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Would you mind taking a look at this short story for me?
Please and thank you.





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Thu Jul 08, 2010 2:29 pm
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stupido says...



could you please review this one "linger on your pale blue eyes"? if so, could you not go on the details and just give an opinion on the whole thing...Topic ID: 66562.thank you





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Fri Aug 13, 2010 6:23 pm
NYCnightowl007 says...



Anyone else?
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Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:54 am
Bookwormart says...



Yes!! Thank you so much for posting something like this. My story's name is Strangely So... or post752526.html#p752526 I really need some reviews for my story. thankyou
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Mon Aug 16, 2010 11:19 pm
ultraviolet says...



Can you review Leave Out All The Rest for me? Thanksies! :D
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Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:32 pm
Flower~Child says...



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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:02 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Hey Nightowl!!

Could you review this for me please?

It's called blood in the sunrise.
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:37 am
xXTheBlackSheepXx says...



Hey nightowl! I was wondering if you could review the first three chapters of my General Fiction novel Eylse?
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I'm worried that they might be too cliche or boring. I could really use your opinion :)
Thanks!!!
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Thu Jun 22, 2023 9:00 am
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