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Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:15 am
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*coco says...



So, no more school (Que the hallelujah music)! Anyway, since most people I know are out tanning in the Caribbeans while I'm stuck at home looking after the monsters that are my younger brothers, I've decided to use all the spare time I have to get stuck into the YWS world and start my own review forum :D

What I'll critique - short stories and novels that fall under the following categories:
action/adventure
general
romantic
sci-fi (occasionally)
fantasy (occasionally)

So if you'd like a review please don't be shy and post your link here along with the name of the piece and the genre and I'll have it done as fast as I can!

Oh, before I forget, I'd really appreciate points in return, or just an invisible hi 5 would be fine

Thanks a bunch, guys! :smt003

*coco

P.S If you'd like to see some examples of some of the reviews I've done so far, just so you get a taste of what you can expect from me, then check out my lit comments page on my YWS profile
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:43 am
whatevr says...



Please review *invisible high five* (thats for now and the points when the job's done (lol i sound like a mobster))

Ttile: Dead to me.

Link: post726480.html#p726480

Genre: General.

Thanks.

~Biffle
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:03 am
Wolferion says...



Cheers! =) I'll gladly give points in exchange =) The piece is Sinful Pride Chapter 2 and it's General fiction.

Have a nice day!
Kyou
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:52 pm
*coco says...



Biffle and Kyou - your reviews are complete, invisible high five's and a creepy smiley face to the pair of you for being my very first review seekers :smt003

If anyone else would like a review, please don't hesitate to ask!

*coco
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:10 pm
Day says...



Have something to keep you going...

I don't have a title for it yet, but it is in the General Novels section.

post726731.html#p726731
"If the king doesn't lead, how can he expect his subordinates to follow?"
  





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Wed Jun 23, 2010 8:54 pm
*coco says...



Day your review is now complete, awsome start by the way :)

Anyone else care for a review? I'm more than happy to do more....

*coco
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 9:05 am
*coco says...



Anyone?
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Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:44 pm
*coco says...



Tigs, your review is complete. Hope I've helped :D

If anyone else would like a review, please don't hesitate to ask!

*coco
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
  





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Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:43 am
Maddy says...



Hey Coco, seems like you're hanging out for something to review! :)
Very much appreciated if you would take the time to review an excerpt from my novel, Faith. It’s a realistic fantasy with an apocalyptic feel.
Link: post733857.html
Thank you!
-Maddy
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you!
-"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."

This awesome post bought to you by me. :)
  





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Fri Jul 09, 2010 10:18 pm
*coco says...



Maddy your review is complete! Thanks for the read :D

Would anybody else like a review?
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
  





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Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:29 am
Jetpack says...



I'd appreciate a review on Pygmalion. It's based on a myth, the link to which is in the spoiler at the end of the story. Any kind of comment is welcome.

PS I think I remember reviewing your Of Loss and Love once upon a time! Nice to see you around. :D
  





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Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:55 am
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Hey can you review this post734563.html
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Sat Jul 10, 2010 4:04 pm
*coco says...



Jetpack - Your review is now complete. An invisible high five to you for the request. I really enjoyed reading your piece :D

SpyOh - I don't normally review poems but since you requested I couldn't say no. I hope my review helped.

If anyone else would like a review please do not hesitate to ask :smt003
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
  





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Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:21 pm
WritingWords says...



Can you please review the link in my signature? Thanks a lot!
Please follow me on all my writing quests by clicking "Follow" on my Profile. Thanks!

Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!
  





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Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:45 pm
*coco says...



Your review is now complete, I hope I helped :D
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