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Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:36 pm
Sionarama says...



OH OH OHHHHH!!! I HAVE ONE!! CHOSE ME OVER HERE!!
okay. Now that I've got your attention, I'd like you to review my work:
An Ode to the Ocean
and
After Adonis
or any others..
thanks!!
CHOW FOR NOW,
sionarama
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Mon Jul 12, 2010 7:00 pm
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pinkangel54123 says...



I was just wondering if you would review my fantasy novel for me. The links in my signature and it's quite long-7 chapters-so I'll give you umm...does 1000 points sound okay? Please do this for me!

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Danie
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Mon Jul 12, 2010 7:35 pm
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GuntaFX says...



Hey,
Was wondering if you could review my short story in return for points, a high five and some good karma :smt002 .

Title - Around The Fur
Genre - General Short Story
viewtopic.php?t=66782
Feel free to tear it a new one.
Appreciated

Lewis
  





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Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:31 pm
*coco says...



Sionarama - you didn't put up a link! :(

Diane - I'll be starting yours soon :D

Gunta - your's is complete. Thanks for the request :smt003
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Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:54 am
Skeen says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic66885.html


got chapter 3 and 4 up of Gaurdian if you'd be willing to review it. I'd definatly appriciate it :)

peace out.
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:42 pm
*coco says...



Skeen - your review is complete! An ivisible high five for your request :D

Diane - your review is complete :)

Sionarama - I think I've found your story - I'll be on it soon
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Tue Jul 20, 2010 12:31 am
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Shearwater says...



Hi Coco, it's me, wondering if you had time to review a piece I'm working on.
Pretty please? I'll give you points! I don't even use them lol
Here's the Link: topic67137.html
It's Fantasy though...lol
Thank you!

~Pink
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Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:06 am
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Prosithion says...



Hey, I was wondering if you could critique a scene from my novella 'In Defense of Our Nation'.

I would suggest scene 1, but I'll leave that up to you.

novel.php?id=461

It's speculative science fiction.

Thanks,
Pros
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Tue Jul 20, 2010 6:30 pm
GeeLyria says...



Hi, *coco*! Would you like to review this for me topic67210.html, is a romantic novel, but the grammar is really bad. I've already read it out loud a million times, but since my first language is Spanish I can't catch those mistakes. :| Thanks! :)
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Sat Aug 14, 2010 10:16 pm
*coco says...



Pink, Pro and Slovalery all three of your works have been reviewed, an invisible high five for the requests!

May I have the pleasure of reviewing anyone else's work? Come on now...don't be shy... :D
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
  





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Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:11 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



Hey :) This piece isn't mine, but it has hardly any reviews, and it's a REALLY good story in terms of plot. I would really like some attention drawn to it, so could you please review it?

topic67862.html

Thanks!
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Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:34 pm
*coco says...



Seamingly, your request is complete. Thanks for the read :D

Anybody else need a review?
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
  





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Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:54 am
*coco says...



Anyone at all?
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Sun Oct 31, 2010 8:16 pm
*coco says...



Anyone? :(
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Mon Nov 01, 2010 2:54 am
napalmerski says...



Me, please, me topic71337.html
grabbing at the 'occasionaly' concerning your reviewing of sci-fi. I think in places it's literary enough to placate a cyborg-denialist :D Short story collection, I don't insist you do all 10 stories, can jump over some, or pick some at random if you like. Thanx
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It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
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