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Mon Sep 13, 2010 4:55 pm
GirlInTheMirror says...



Hi! Will you pretty pretty pretty please review my story Beauty's Beast? I know that it's fanfiction, but I am going to reconfigure it so that it is based solely on the original version of "Beauty and the Beast" making it not fanfiction because the original version was so incredibly old. It is also the first part of a novel, so that makes it pretty tempting huh? Sorry I'm begging but I just liked your reviews so much and could use some harsh criticism, (note the subtle flattery). Thank you for considering it!
  





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Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:16 pm
BenFranks says...



Haven't been able to get on to YWS recently so sorry for the wait. Review request shall be fulfilled by the end of the week!
  





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Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:37 am
SilentRain says...



Hello! This is a poem I would like for you to review>> topic69559.html

Thanks

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:11 am
Firearris says...



Do an item of mine? :D

topic69428.html?hilit=coconuts%20september
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  





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Wed Jan 05, 2011 4:34 pm
BenFranks says...



Re-opened.
  





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Wed Jan 05, 2011 6:27 pm
Nightshade says...



Hi, could you review a poem for me?
topic74229.html
Thanks!
  





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Wed Jan 05, 2011 6:59 pm
BenFranks says...



Done and dusted, Night - hope it helped.
  





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Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:02 am
Elinor says...



Hey, Ben!

Could you take a look at this for me? It's the first chapter of my novel. It's recently edited and I would like fresh opinions. :)

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

-- Walt Disney
  





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Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:31 am
ErBear says...



Hey! Could you review this for me? It's a general fiction short story-

topic72211.html

Just a note- some people are saying there's not enough views from both sides, but that's because it's a POV. :)

Thanks!
~formerly Ilovebubbles123

"There's only one thing
to do
three words
for you.
Ooh, I love you.

There's only one way
to say
those three words
that's what I'll do.
Ooh, I love you. "

For you.
  





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Fri Jan 07, 2011 5:21 pm
Button says...



Hey- if you have some free time or are bored, could you please take a peek at this?

topic74384.html

I'd really appreciate it. :)
Thanks!

-Coral-
  





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Fri Jan 07, 2011 7:17 pm
BenFranks says...



All done. (Y)
  





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Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:10 am
HomelessPorcupine says...



Hey there, it's me again! I just posted a new poem that I would love for you to review if you have the time, I'd really appreciate it! :)

post807099.html#p807099

It's a light poem that doesn't really have any underlying themes to it, but I really need help with a couple of the lines.

Thanks in advance!
-HP
"I can't afford a teddy bear, so I sleep with this contact solution."


Taran: He will not succeed in this. Somehow, we must find a way to escape. We dare not lose hope.

Fflewddur: I agree absolutely, your general idea is excellent; it's only the details that are lacking.
  





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Sat Jan 15, 2011 9:11 pm
Button says...



Hi again :)

If you have some extra time, could you please take a peek at this?
topic74672.html

It'd be greatly appreciate :)

Thanks!
-Coral-
  





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Mon Feb 25, 2013 12:40 am
BenFranks says...



----- RE-OPENED -----
  





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Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:19 am
winterbites says...



If its not too much C: work.php?id=100067
I've got you under a spell and I don't think I'll be letting you out~ If Only She Knew Voodoo Like I Do, Get Scared.
  








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