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Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:26 am
blackbird12 says...



Mind checking out this poem? Please do tear it apart! I want to see if it's got potential. Thanks in advance.

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Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:19 pm
Wolferion says...



This topic feels like a graveyard >=0 Time to use some magic >=) Back in work, if somebody needs a review for free, ask!
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Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:38 am
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SilentRain says...



Hello, do you think you could review this poem for me? topic68408.html...

Thnak you,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:26 am
Yuriiko says...



Hey there, Kyou!

I've seen enough of your critiques and they actually look helpful. So would you please be so helpful to help me in my poem titled: The Silent Scream

Thanks in advance. :smt001

(Sorry for the annoying repetition of a particular word) :o
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Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:34 pm
Wolferion says...



^^ Both done. I apologize for writing reviews that do not appeal to the eye and mind, but I wrote what I thought and I hope it helped at least a bit =) Best of luck.

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Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:53 pm
SilentRain says...



Hay! Me agian... I edited that poem you review, and was wondering if you would review it as well... here is the link, topic68408.html

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:03 pm
Wolferion says...



Ah, I've been washed away with Vanish to the second page! >=0 Calling S.O.S.!
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Sat Sep 04, 2010 4:41 pm
blackbird12 says...



Hey there again! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks in advance! (And I promise I won't take it down before you have a chance to review it this time, sorry about that...)

topic69098.html
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Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:55 am
HostofHorus says...



Hi there! I would be ever so grateful if you could review my poem, it is called "The Things You Never Knew." Thanks in advance, providing you accept it. :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post760233.html#p760233
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Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)





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Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:11 pm
Wolferion says...



Both done! Hope it helped at least a bit =) Good luck!

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Tue Sep 07, 2010 8:50 pm
Wariofart says...



Hey, can you review my short story? Thank you, and awesome avatar ;)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=69211
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Thu Sep 09, 2010 1:45 pm
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Done ^^
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Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:47 am
SilentRain says...



Hello agian! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? topic69314.html

Thanks
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!





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Wed Jun 21, 2023 6:23 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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