Alright, so, the first chapter of my new novel. Even The Beautiful Lose Control post792585.html#p792585 Honestly, what do you think? I'm not exactly sure where it's going, but it's gonna be romantic.
'We will never believe again, kick drum beating in my chest again, oh, we will never believe in anything again, preach electric to a microphone stand.'
Point, done. I'll give Leth's a shot later this week end and I need fresh posts comin' till then since I am a bit tired of reading Fantasy. So somethin' else(even Fantasy would do)
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
Would you mind reviewing that for me, Shubs? It's the beginning of a novel of mine... yet again. x3 I've rewritten the beginning of the first novel I ever wrote, and would love your opinion on it.
Hey Shubhi! I was wondering if you would pretty-please-with-sprinkles-icecream-and-cherries-on-top review my romantic short story, Almost. I have plans to submit it to a magazine, and any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Here's the link:
Hey, PLEASE review my stuff Especially my first story on here, Together Again Part One (I need to get more points to post Part Two...); I want to know what people think of that THANK YOUU! xxx
The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties. — Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians
THANK YOUU! xxx
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